Reviews for Natural Equilibrium |
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Angelus320 chapter 23 . 7/9/2012 Glad to see updates to the story...though it had been a while, I had to read from the beginning to refresh my self with the story...Def. not a hardship. Looking forward to more updates soon...congrats on the wedding! |
imahistorian chapter 23 . 7/9/2012 Reading this through I'm just impressed with the emotional crests in this chapter. There's really so much going on in Deeks' mind, so much he is thinking about when it comes to Kensi, his job, his adopted family and all the good and bad history there. His reassurance that he takes from thinking of Kensi is lovely, as well as his realization that he needs to be there for her, too. I do look forward to their inevitable conversation and what they figure out together for their future. The resolution on Laura's assault was such a nice relief. It's good to see when the bad guys pay and that even when it may take time, it still can happen. And Deeks' reaction to that, his physical and almost all consuming response, just said so much about how much that news meant to him, which speaks to the kind of man he is and how much he cares for Laura, Jim and Libby. And I like Knowles! He seems like a decent guy trying to do a hard job and trying to do it morally in a sea of difficulty and occasional corruption. Deeks could probably use more allies and it's nice to see he's got one there. And thanks for such a lovely shout out to my new story. That was very sweet of you. And much appreciated. |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/9/2012 nice Monty Python reference :D |
SunnyCitrus10 chapter 23 . 7/9/2012 Wow. That's a lot for one man to take. I'm glad Derks is getting better and that LAPD got Russo. I hope Deeks decides to become an agent with NCIS. At least he has Kensi to help him deal with the aftermath of everything. |
Guest chapter 23 . 7/9/2012 great chapter keep updating |
Somnium1 chapter 23 . 7/9/2012 Tense chapter but really enjoyed it, I'm curious as to who Deeks text as there was no reply yet. |
kath46 chapter 23 . 7/8/2012 great chapter; very emotional for the readers. |
sman4thewin chapter 23 . 7/8/2012 Yah! The nightmare of Russo is now over. Great job at tying this loose end up. I can't wait for more. :D |
phillydi chapter 23 . 7/8/2012 Nicely written. Great to be able to get into Deeks head like that. Really coming along nicely. Good work. Di |
Sweet Lu chapter 23 . 7/8/2012 Your writing is an inspiration. You discover the depths of Deeks' soul in this one, and the power of the emotion in your writing is stunning. You write the Deeks I have come to love and I can't get enough of it. |
superMartinha chapter 22 . 6/22/2012 please, continue |
Katy Cooper chapter 22 . 6/18/2012 Wow, this is so good! Thank you! |
AliyahNCIS chapter 22 . 6/18/2012 that last paragraph was totally my favourite. what a sweet date! D&K are sooo cute! Thanks! |
LisaG16 chapter 22 . 6/17/2012 Very cute end scene...I can't picture it perfectly! I really hate that there are so many LAPD people that don't like Deeks...what's the reason? They jealous of his skill, intelligence and talent as a cop and now NCIS liason? Really ticks me off! Grrrrrrrr! |
imahistorian chapter 22 . 6/17/2012 "You had me at 'jello'." Aww, so perfect! I liked how the end of the chapter brought this around full circle from the beginning, and the in between also emphasized the relationships all around Kensi and Deeks. The rest of the NCIS team, and Deeks' interactions with the other cops. I also love that others in the team can see a change in Kensi. She's obviously realizing and accepting the change Deeks has brought on in her, but Sam seeing it just speaks volumes. And the Chinese Jack Bristow line: Perfection! ;) |