Reviews for Shadow and Ash
Thornado chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
Agh. That was so sad and heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. I'M NOT CRYING, IT'S JUST RAINING ON MY FACE.
Kintora chapter 6 . 3/14/2013
I was in tears through these six hard chapters. Stung pretty close to home, personally, and feeling Naruto's pain was like feeling my own all over again. Though it's been a few years, the pain is always there. The only difference is learning to control how close to the heart that pain is allowed. But a story like this makes the moment of loss so fresh, I found myself losing my composure. I think it will be a while before I can revisit this installment...

Spectacular writing though - you're very good at keeping things "real."
BiblioMatsuri chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
*sniffs*

Still, life goes on.
Amarante96 chapter 6 . 12/16/2012
Gods I can't believe Shadow died...
I love your stories and all but I seriously cried like a baby during the last few paragraphs.

I always loved Shadow the most out of all Naruto's pokemon. After all, Shadow was the ideal friend pokemon or otherwise. Shadow also reminded me a lot of a friend of mine as well. She died from leukemia 3 years ago. She was my only friend. I was always the outcast in school and even amongst my cousins so when she passed on I felt like dying. Shadow was a lot like her personality-wise.

I hope you continue to write and God bless.
The Writer with a Reason chapter 6 . 10/31/2012
Well, that was one of the most depressing and sad things I have ever read. But I guess the start is more depressing than the end... I am glad you finished it on a high note, though.

Congratulations, though. You really succeeded in making me ALMOST cry after reading that. Now that I have read the previous stories before this, I only think one thing...

IT WAS SO DAMN SAD!
the Composcreator chapter 6 . 12/9/2011
i like the touch with Jirachi at the end
PopthePuff chapter 6 . 9/27/2011
Omnomnom, moar evil Nagato.

Aaaand...Waaah!:(

Sad scene is sad. Also short. :/

Well, I liked it. And hated it. Because Shadow died.

But I could enjoy reading it.

Looking forward to your next! :D
PopthePuff chapter 5 . 9/27/2011
Yeeeaaah, had a ccomputer breakdown recently.

Oh...lolololol!

Poor, poor 'lil' Bolt.

Aaand I'm curious to who shall fill the slot.

Hnn, thought Ash would have a bigger role in this. :/
phantom-jedi1 chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
And that was the perfect way to do it. Well done.

Phantom Jedi
justbehappydammit chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
Oh my god. You've done it. You actually made me cry. I don't know whether to curse you or applaud you for managing that. It's obvious now why Uzu-chan said Minato and Kushina wanted her and Senkou to breed: to give Naruto an egg! This is without a doubt the most heartbreaking story of yours that I have read.
mountainelements chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
I can't wait to see the new Eevee! I'm not sure how Naruto's going to take it, but at least taking care of it should distract him from his grief. I wonder how Demon will react to the baby pokemon.
Nicharveechu chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
Um... Is it just me or did you have three subplots and then only finish two of them? What ever happened to the pikachu interactions? I want some closure dangit!

Other than that gripe, I love your work in this 'verse, keep it up!
hun chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
Well, that was sorta saddening :/.

I am so surprised. Why have you not told us all that this would be sad. oh, wait...
Amaterasuice chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
Eevee is in the egg, right? And shadow was watching
laz chapter 6 . 9/26/2011
Excellent :) Please keep writing this series. Im sorta kinda possibly hoping that with this fic you are gonna continue writing this series... cause i really really love it :) Thanks.
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