What a wonderful story you have made, I was so sad when I finished reading it. I used to watch Young Justice on Cartoon Network when I was 13 years old, and now that I’m 25 I came back to this old website that hold me on my darkest and brightest teenagers days to revive all the emotions these stories brought me. I wish I had then the English level I have today, so I would look up the English fanfics and read yours. It’s wonderful and very well articulate. I love Artemis and the complexity of her character, her history, and how Wally has its own way to dive through it. I lov Hope the producers bring back Wally to the series, I really miss him on the screen (but we always have the fanfics and great stories like yours).

What a wonderful story you have made, I was so sad when I finished reading it. I used to watch Young Justice on Cartoon Network when I was 13 years old, and now that I’m 25 I came back to this old website that hold me on my darkest and brightest teenagers days to revive all the emotions these stories brought me. I wish I had then the English level I have today, so I would look up the English fanfics and read yours. It’s wonderful and very well articulate. I love Artemis and the complexity of her character, her history, and how Wally has its own way to dive through it. I love that you made Wally an Aries and Artemis a Scorpio, because ten years later I know exactly why you did it and I AGREE. I think Wally can’t be a Capricorn, maybe a Sagittarius but never an earth sign as the tv show gave us. Hope the producers bring back Wally to the series, I really miss him on the screen (but we always have the fanfics and great stories like yours).
Hope this review founds you well and lights you up after almost ten years, and thank you again for this incredible work of yours.

This story is making me so happy :D

OMG THE GASP I JUST INHALED DRIED MY THROAT. I WAS JUST LISTENING TO 'SUPERMASSIVE BLACK HOLE' ! I EVEN THOUGHT OF THAT SONG WHEN IT SAID A NEW DONG CAME ON

I feel so stupid for not noticing that's Dick's friend were modeled after the Teen Titans

Are you quoting the Lion King?!

Yes I did and it was genius

Amazing, Wonderful
You know what I can't find words to tell you how incredible this is,

Okay, so t huh is was amazing. I'm a sucker for some good fluff, but beyond thay... the chatacter writing. That was some of the most brilliant character writings Obe ever read.

All of the characters feel 3 dimensional and unique and not just a copy-paste from the show. It was really amazing and this another for one of my favorite fanfics. Thank you for this wonderful story.

Reading through this for probably the third time and this paragraph gets me every time

And for once in his life, time became irrelevant to the supersonic speedster. The hands in his internal clock shifted and paused, and he began to notice things that would generally float away due to his need for speed. He saw—and could almost feel—the silver moonlight pouring around them, spilling into the dimly blue sand. He could hear each ripple of water as it cascaded onto the beach, and could feel the soothing heat radiating between his body and Artemis's. With his blanket enclosing them both, he amusingly compared them to two birds—two birds of a snarky feather, flocking strangely silent together.

An absolute work of art, and that's saying a lot considering how well crafted each of these storylines, and how they fit all fit into the greater arc. Not only can I completely imagine this happening, but when I think about how their relationship grew in the show I think about the scenes in this story not whatever I had imagined.

An absolute work of art my man, great job!

Thank you so much for writing and sharing! I just read the entire story in one wonderful lazy Sunday, unable and absolutely unwilling to stop. You have a great way with words, fantastic vocab and brilliant dialogues. I love how you capture their emotions, the slow transition, step by step building trust, heart-warming encounters, witty banters, bubbling feelings. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful story with us!

That was an absolutely beautiful story. Very well crafted, an absolute pleasure to read. Couldn't even take the time to review between chapters I was so enthralled. Thanks for putting out such an amazing piece of work

Nice, but its like yeast in an oven; its that fluffy.

This is the best I've ever read. You are a genius...

I loved the teen Titans reference