|Reviews for A Lingering Feeling|
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/26
this was amazing. I love this fan fiction along with young justice. you did a great job and I can't wait to read more of your stories.
| Trying -Helps chapter 2 . 1/4
The writing of your story is really good and I really like the part with Connor it takes the cake of funny moments for me.
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| reddevil47 chapter 15 . 12/22/2013
Nice story, too bad their relationship couldn't end like this
| Guest User chapter 15 . 11/20/2013
I love this story so much! I love how you put those little quotes before the chapter! This story is all I've been thinking about for the past few days! Its that good! I would've been fine if you ended it with Wonderland (that chapter was so cute) but it just gets better :)
| Aivlyz chapter 11 . 11/14/2013
This chapter was so cute! I've never had eggnog either... I wonder how they taste like. We don't really celebrate Christmas here. Christmas for me is just presents (well, back when I was a kid) plus, my birthday's on Christmas Eve so I get double the amount of presents. 8'D
| Aivlyz chapter 7 . 11/13/2013
Doooood, your English, it's so- so eloquent!
You're writing skill is so beautiful.
Your vacobulary is so colourful! (No pun intended ahah)
Your story ideas are so cute and amazing!
Ahhhhh!1!1!1! Will you marry me? Will you please marry me.
| Aivlyz chapter 3 . 11/12/2013
Dooooooood, I loved this chapter so much. Dem texts are so funny. Omg, I wish I could text both of them.
| ell chapter 3 . 10/15/2013
I want to be the 700th. Yay. Gimme cookies or something...
| MirageDream chapter 15 . 10/4/2013
Oh my this was such an amazing Asdfghjkl; I felt tingly all over when I was reading. I really enjoyed this story (:
| qweerlittlefish chapter 15 . 9/25/2013
Oh. My. Gosh.
Scratch that- THIS was the best ending ever. It's amazing that they waited ten years, for starters, but it's also beautiful. I'd love to see how their relationship developed during that time (hint), but I'm perfectly content with this too.
This was amazing, AH-MAY-ZING! You should be so proud of your writing.
| qweerlittlefish chapter 14 . 9/25/2013
This was impeccable! What an amazing ending! You wrote it so well, you wrote the couple so well! The evolvement of their relationship was truly hypnotic!
Just wondering if you wrote a fic after this, about spitfire? Maybe a further progression into their relationship? Do you have any Spitfire fics of your own you could recommend, at the very least? Or...just any, that are at the same epic level as this?
| qweerlittlefish chapter 13 . 9/25/2013
This chapter was prodigious- there's another new one.
Seriously, I love the Young Justice show, but your Spitfire kiss was ten-times better.
You write raw emotion incredibly, and everything was so vivid.
I feel like I'm repeating myself a lot, but that's because everything is so consistent. All the chapters are simply stunning, honestly.
| qweerlittlefish chapter 12 . 9/25/2013
This was an absolutely terrific chapter. It was so well written, so well established, so well thought-out. The fairy-tail took me back to my childhood, when my mum would sit in a too-small-chair beside my bed, and tell me Russian folk-tales and sing lullabies that I've long since forgotten.
This chapter was like...like that smell, when you walk past a bakery, or...freshly cut grass, or something, and fond memories just spring up out of nowhere. It was incredible.
I felt a sense of dread when Jay was in a coma, I was actually worried. You've built the characters as people so well, and it just makes it so easy to trust in what you're telling us, as readers.
And now there's thunder outside...and I wanna just curl up with your story forever, and read to my hearts content. I'm moving onto the next chapter now. Sorry about bombarding you with reviews.
| qweerlittlefish chapter 11 . 9/25/2013
Oh my gosh, for starters, I want to apologise right now, because the AN here says to not said messages relating to canon birthday...and I did. *hangs head in shame* I am sooo soooo sorry.
This was draw-droppingly amazing.
No one can really make me think and smile and laugh and cry with laughter, like you do. This chapter really had it all. I really, truly, felt bad for Artemis. I actually saw the realisation of Wally, when he finally noted he liked Artemis. I laughed so hard at his re-telling of 'Twas the Night before Christmas."
Everything about this was just magical. This is truly a story I will treasure forever. The progression from kinda-friends, to best friends (as mentioned here, which made me squeal) was just impeccable. I really wish more stories had this within them; this amazing way of getting to you stand up and go with the flow of it. I seriously feel like I know the characters, and I know their inner feelings. And though I know they get together in the show, this story is ten-times better. It's letting me see plausible moments, times of growing and mesmerising snippets of their lives, and it's truly amazing.
I can't thank you enough for being so great.
P.S I miss the snow. :(
| qweerlittlefish chapter 10 . 9/25/2013
Oh man, oh man! So first off, you wrote something remarkable. This chapter, I can't even put into words...it was...just super! Hhaha! You make them so human, so real...I can see their movements, I can hear their voices, and no, I'm not crazy. You just write like a pro, bro.
Secondly, thanks for helping me with my biology homework. ;)