Wally is a fantastic sweetheart.

Ooh, interesting! Enter the sexual tension.

This is was adorable!
And it shifted because she all of a sudden seemed…softer, and he saw all that jagged armor forged from the fires of self-preservation crumble away. She was more relaxed than he's ever seen her, and she wore a tender visage that he didn't even know existed. Her eyes were a sparkling bright grey that seemed to glow blue with an ethereal quality, and her smile—he hated to admit it, but she was really pretty when she smiled, because it further ignited her eyes, like a spark suddenly becoming a flame.

That part was just amazing.

Teen Titans!

That was so cute!

Cool. I loved the bit with the crunches and Wally's delicate male ego about his abs.

Oh my god! These four new characters (vinve, benji, zoey, and rae) are all dicks' friends, right? Im just wondering where you came up with their descriptions. Have you seen the tv show 'Teen Titans'? Well, it ended a while ago but its still on youtube. I suggest you watch it. These characters match personalities with each Titan. There is Robin (would be dick) , Starfire (would be zoey and is from a different planet), Cyborg (vince and is also very big and tall), Raven (would be rae and is also mysterious), and Beastboy (would be benji and also loves tofu) But really, its almost uncanney how you chose their personalities the same.

"As many as you like, and for as long as you like." I don't think I've read a more perfect ending or proposal. In the history of ever.

Hoolia, there are tears in my eyes. Tears from being privileged to follow you on this journey of a work that is nothing short of majestic. And brilliant. And a million other adjectives that will never be able to aptly describe how much I admire the effort and time and love you've dedicated to this masterpiece.

In my head, this is all canon. Their emotions, their progression into something more than best friends, their love...

And I feel so blessed to having been graced not only with a story from smart, funny, talented author, but having found a truly wonderful friend as well. Thank you, Hoolia. From the bottom of my heart.

Love,
BLA

That...is the most brilliant comparison of describing how they fell in love. Director's commentary...

I think I snorted tea out of my nose when I read about the textbook where babies come from.

And ohhh...the way it ended...with the sunset and the beach and just...perfect.

Your humor in this one was spot on. A trash can...Superboy's gag Christmas gift...the wolf that's OBVIOUSLY Roy...the giraffes (poor Wally!)...the bras...

And then you flip a 180 and convey all that beautiful imagery when describing the tigers and how it all subtly hints at Artemis becoming Tigress and just...the Terrible T's... The turaco scene especially because it reminded me of a zoo visit I took long ago...

And let's not forget all those majestic romantic bits of Wally being chivalrous... the Danny Phantom reference *squealing because WIN*, and the scene where they FINALLY kiss for real :D And good Lord, the hair tie! *Dying llama noises*

It's just...so achingly beautiful, what you've done with my imagination this chapter.

You know it's funny how Evil batman os named owlman

Amd spiderwoman is a marvel character

Wow the teen titans in a young justice fanfiction. Im sure benji is supposed to be garfield though

I'm thirteen and I was staring at the phrase for half an hour before I gave up and had to search it on google...

Thank you for this story :) you're very talented and I'm glad I've had the chance to read this heartwarming tale.
Now. Please excuse me while I go to a corner and cry.

WHAT?! WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN IT'S OVER! WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?!