Reviews for A Lingering Feeling
TurdleFlubs chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Weeeeeeee gooo Wally X Artmeis!

Their little challenges are so cute! Artemis better be careful Wally wont lose a challenge... History proves me right, you definitely lost to me ;)

scary movie time! they're the best when the girl is easily scared hehehe
Angelically Scarred chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Nice job. I'm curious on what you'll come up with next.
Black Licorice Addict chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
What a cute beginning! You had a lot of really great one liners as well, my favorites being "hell hath no fury than a groggy Atlantian", "You can't touch what you can't catch," and "I need to use something to distract the sharks away from me."

All I could think of was Shark Week on the discovery channel. Lol. And I think you did a really good beach scene-nothing too cheesy. I haven't read too many stories expounding on the spitfire pairing that start out on the beach, so kudos to you. Keep up the great work :D
xxHeadInTheStarsxx chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I love these two. Seriously, I can't get enough of them x) And your story is so cute! I love the idea of a collection of one-shots you have here! I can't wait to read more of them :]
Mozzie128 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
You write so well (and if I could write in italics, 'well' would be italicized for emphasis) I love the Spitfire pairing and you portray them so accurately...it makes me smile. Please continue! Oh and thanks for making my Friday even better :P
Insertname chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Plz update!
graysonizer chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Haha, nice! I like it! I think her eyes are supposed to be blue, in the cartoons, too. Hmm.
TheSilverSandwich chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I loved it :) Very cute, most of the Wally and Artemis fics always have them fighting. Not that I don't love it when they fight, but it's nice to have a change every now and then. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up! :)
Fallenarchangel chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
haha i love it :)
THISISALLDELETED chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Oooh... I love 'It Only Takes A Moment'. This is brilliant work! You're amazing. Are you gonna send 'em to Disney World like Em? Wishes was always my favourite piece.
Anna Marie xoxo chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I loved this so frikkin much! I loved the descriptions, the story, the interactions the EVERYTHING! This is simply perfection in fanfic form and I super duper can't wait for the next chapter. I love Wally so much and I love the way you wrote his interactions with Artemis and his reactions to her. And as if I couldn't love you any more, you went ahead and quoted the epicness that is Barney Stinson ! That's like two of my favourite characters ever amalgamated right there! Well, at least I presume the whole "Challenge accepted" was a "How I met your mother" reference. Maybe I'm waaay off and you were just saying it with no connection whatsoever. Either way this fic is AWESOMENESS! :D
moras chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
gdi this one-shot man just. i'm excited for this collection already. the interaction so far is electric - i tend to be cautious of waltermis or w/e b/c most fics i see portray 'em so 2-d give a rushed appreciation for each other imo. however, even with a fic sort of handling a 'vulnerable' part of wally the interaction here feels smooth and gossh just them in the ocean.

also wally's boxers A i'm looking forward to more of this!
Coconuat chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Haha batman boxers(I want one).I like this fic it's fun and cute :)
KF-AxxMexx chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
nice...i just love wally and artie..update soon..xD
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