Reviews for A Lingering Feeling |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Weeeeeeee gooo Wally X Artmeis! Their little challenges are so cute! Artemis better be careful Wally wont lose a challenge... History proves me right, you definitely lost to me ;) scary movie time! they're the best when the girl is easily scared hehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice job. I'm curious on what you'll come up with next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cute beginning! You had a lot of really great one liners as well, my favorites being "hell hath no fury than a groggy Atlantian", "You can't touch what you can't catch," and "I need to use something to distract the sharks away from me." All I could think of was Shark Week on the discovery channel. Lol. And I think you did a really good beach scene-nothing too cheesy. I haven't read too many stories expounding on the spitfire pairing that start out on the beach, so kudos to you. Keep up the great work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love these two. Seriously, I can't get enough of them x) And your story is so cute! I love the idea of a collection of one-shots you have here! I can't wait to read more of them :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() You write so well (and if I could write in italics, 'well' would be italicized for emphasis) I love the Spitfire pairing and you portray them so accurately...it makes me smile. Please continue! Oh and thanks for making my Friday even better :P |
![]() ![]() Plz update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, nice! I like it! I think her eyes are supposed to be blue, in the cartoons, too. Hmm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it :) Very cute, most of the Wally and Artemis fics always have them fighting. Not that I don't love it when they fight, but it's nice to have a change every now and then. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha i love it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh... I love 'It Only Takes A Moment'. This is brilliant work! You're amazing. Are you gonna send 'em to Disney World like Em? Wishes was always my favourite piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this so frikkin much! I loved the descriptions, the story, the interactions the EVERYTHING! This is simply perfection in fanfic form and I super duper can't wait for the next chapter. I love Wally so much and I love the way you wrote his interactions with Artemis and his reactions to her. And as if I couldn't love you any more, you went ahead and quoted the epicness that is Barney Stinson ! That's like two of my favourite characters ever amalgamated right there! Well, at least I presume the whole "Challenge accepted" was a "How I met your mother" reference. Maybe I'm waaay off and you were just saying it with no connection whatsoever. Either way this fic is AWESOMENESS! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() gdi this one-shot man just. i'm excited for this collection already. the interaction so far is electric - i tend to be cautious of waltermis or w/e b/c most fics i see portray 'em so 2-d give a rushed appreciation for each other imo. however, even with a fic sort of handling a 'vulnerable' part of wally the interaction here feels smooth and gossh just them in the ocean. also wally's boxers A i'm looking forward to more of this! |
![]() ![]() Haha batman boxers(I want one).I like this fic it's fun and cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice...i just love wally and artie..update soon..xD |