Reviews for A Lingering Feeling |
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![]() ![]() ![]() There was a song I was listening to the other day that made me think of the complexities of a budding Spitfire relationship from Artemis' POV. Die for you by Megan McCauley, if only because it seems to embody a lot of what is going on in Artemis' life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I figured it out, they are modeled after the Teen Titans. You did a great job of giving each of them a personality that reflected a given titan though so it was probably easier than it should have been, Loving this though |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I was reading this story, I thought to myself, this is how a true relationship needs to grow, slow but long lasting for a lifetime. I also liked how this ended, unlike how Wally died in Young Justice, I was so sad and heartbroken for Artemis. This is probably one of the best Spitfire stories I ever read. |
![]() ![]() Of course Bruce Lee has to sneak into every fic i read. |
![]() ![]() I knew you were going to make a Fault in our stars quote eventually! Perfect. You have earned a gold star or rather...1 point... |
![]() ![]() I love your little sneak peaks at the beginnings like when you say "I dont own young justice...or mean girls." Or how you tried to explain Atremis's eyes but instead let Wally do the honours. And if theres no misletoe action for Wally in the next chapter i will be greatly upset. |
![]() ![]() Why isn't anyone just whelmed. You walked right into that one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh gosh this was a beautiful and charming story. I really got caught up in your choice of words and the cute interactions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod. I absolutely died for this story! I have never read anything like it before! It's brilliant! So much that I read it non stop until I finished it a 2: ! am! Take pride my friend, this was beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMYGOD! I totally missed the teen titans in his friends! HOLY CRAP! AHAHAHAHAHAA! you got me! oh that was good! |
![]() ![]() Actually wally would be a scorpio |
![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter, love the amount of emotion you're exploring in this story. One mistake you made, not really important but I thought I'd let you know, you can't see Uranus or Neptune with the naked eye. |
![]() ![]() this was amazing. I love this fan fiction along with young justice. you did a great job and I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The writing of your story is really good and I really like the part with Connor it takes the cake of funny moments for me. Take the Good Person Test, fourth search result on Google for (Good Person Test). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, too bad their relationship couldn't end like this |