Reviews for A Lingering Feeling |
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![]() ![]() I love this story so much! I love how you put those little quotes before the chapter! This story is all I've been thinking about for the past few days! Its that good! I would've been fine if you ended it with Wonderland (that chapter was so cute) but it just gets better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was so cute! I've never had eggnog either... I wonder how they taste like. We don't really celebrate Christmas here. Christmas for me is just presents (well, back when I was a kid) plus, my birthday's on Christmas Eve so I get double the amount of presents. 8'D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Doooood, your English, it's so- so eloquent! You're writing skill is so beautiful. Your vacobulary is so colourful! (No pun intended ahah) Your story ideas are so cute and amazing! Ahhhhh!1!1!1! Will you marry me? Will you please marry me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dooooooood, I loved this chapter so much. Dem texts are so funny. Omg, I wish I could text both of them. |
![]() ![]() I want to be the 700th. Yay. Gimme cookies or something... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my this was such an amazing Asdfghjkl; I felt tingly all over when I was reading. I really enjoyed this story (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Gosh. Scratch that- THIS was the best ending ever. It's amazing that they waited ten years, for starters, but it's also beautiful. I'd love to see how their relationship developed during that time (hint), but I'm perfectly content with this too. This was amazing, AH-MAY-ZING! You should be so proud of your writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was impeccable! What an amazing ending! You wrote it so well, you wrote the couple so well! The evolvement of their relationship was truly hypnotic! Just wondering if you wrote a fic after this, about spitfire? Maybe a further progression into their relationship? Do you have any Spitfire fics of your own you could recommend, at the very least? Or...just any, that are at the same epic level as this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was prodigious- there's another new one. Seriously, I love the Young Justice show, but your Spitfire kiss was ten-times better. You write raw emotion incredibly, and everything was so vivid. I feel like I'm repeating myself a lot, but that's because everything is so consistent. All the chapters are simply stunning, honestly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an absolutely terrific chapter. It was so well written, so well established, so well thought-out. The fairy-tail took me back to my childhood, when my mum would sit in a too-small-chair beside my bed, and tell me Russian folk-tales and sing lullabies that I've long since forgotten. This chapter was like...like that smell, when you walk past a bakery, or...freshly cut grass, or something, and fond memories just spring up out of nowhere. It was incredible. I felt a sense of dread when Jay was in a coma, I was actually worried. You've built the characters as people so well, and it just makes it so easy to trust in what you're telling us, as readers. And now there's thunder outside...and I wanna just curl up with your story forever, and read to my hearts content. I'm moving onto the next chapter now. Sorry about bombarding you with reviews. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh, for starters, I want to apologise right now, because the AN here says to not said messages relating to canon birthday...and I did. *hangs head in shame* I am sooo soooo sorry. This was draw-droppingly amazing. No one can really make me think and smile and laugh and cry with laughter, like you do. This chapter really had it all. I really, truly, felt bad for Artemis. I actually saw the realisation of Wally, when he finally noted he liked Artemis. I laughed so hard at his re-telling of 'Twas the Night before Christmas." Everything about this was just magical. This is truly a story I will treasure forever. The progression from kinda-friends, to best friends (as mentioned here, which made me squeal) was just impeccable. I really wish more stories had this within them; this amazing way of getting to you stand up and go with the flow of it. I seriously feel like I know the characters, and I know their inner feelings. And though I know they get together in the show, this story is ten-times better. It's letting me see plausible moments, times of growing and mesmerising snippets of their lives, and it's truly amazing. I can't thank you enough for being so great. P.S I miss the snow. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, oh man! So first off, you wrote something remarkable. This chapter, I can't even put into words...it was...just super! Hhaha! You make them so human, so real...I can see their movements, I can hear their voices, and no, I'm not crazy. You just write like a pro, bro. Secondly, thanks for helping me with my biology homework. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is actually one of my favourites so far. It was so heart-warming and sweet. Can't help but feel a little bit bad for Artemis though. :/ Until the end, then I was like, yeah, she has it all. ;) Hhahah No, seriously. As per usual, your descriptive techniques are to-die-for...or unsurpassable, whichever you like more. Loved the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good ending? It was perfect! Urgh, this was so...I'm speechless. You just have a knack for (not gonna lie) opening a whole new world of writing, and you just delve into the world so well. The characters are so believable, and the chapters are so perfecttttt! I really wanna read on, but before I do, I just wanted to let you know that I spent half the day (since I got back from work) looking for a fanfic to read, and I just couldn't get into any. None blew my socks off, or immersed me. I looked to this because It was on the list of top favourited stories (in filters)...and I really don't regret it. Best decision ever. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOOH! That's so crazy! How Cam called Arty tigress...or how you wrote about it before season 2. The restaurant scene was so fantastic! Again, the way you describe is uber great! And the way Wally acted was pretty cool...you know when you just wish you had a friend or boyfriend that acted the way characters do in films or books? Urgh, I'm hopeless. Just letting you know, this is like the King of all Fics- its crazy, life-changing-ly epic. |