Urghh! This was so dazzling- oh yeah, I found a new word.

As per usual, it was written in a fashion that I could only aspire to write like. Loved the chapter, loved the moments, and unfortunately, no, I'm not keeping track of the points. :( I wish I could have- I'm gonna read on to see if you mention it.

And I don't think the story should 'move faster' as some reviewers have said...I think it's perfect. Really, honestly, truly- you're showing the progression immaculately. It's enthralling!

One thing I have to say, however- and please don't hate me, is that Wally is a Scorpio in Young Justice. I know because my dad has the same birthday as him, and my dad is a Scorpio. :/ I understand that you're not going for details that intense, and at the time of writing, I suppose you didn't know? Did the episode air at that point? *face palms* I feel like a horrible person, complaining about such a small detail...but yeah, thought I'd mention it. *drops to knees* Please don't hate me.

Oh my gosh. I can't get over this fic.

Again, I wanted to tell you that your writing style is amazing, the story is beautiful, and you are extremely creative!

Wally and Artemis' spar...especially the end...was just amazing. I feel like I'm overusing that word, but for now, I can't think of another- guess you could say I'm speechless, in my own, usually over-talkative, way.

How do you write so well? Do you like, plan out everything in immaculate detail, or just go with the flow? Tell me your secrets, man, because to write like you would make me the happiest person in the whole world.

The sky above was an ashen blanket of gray, but what the sky lacked in vitality, the earth redeemed itself with a palette of bright hues. Almost every tree was ablaze with crimson, gold, and orange, and when a slight breeze rustled through, the leaves would drift downwards like brilliant rain and join the eddying ocean of their brethren sprawled out on the light green grass.

How in...oh my gosh, how did you write that? It's beautiful! Not only was the chapter just filled with hilarity and awesomeness, but, by God, you are an amazing writer. The bonding moments are getting better and better (is that possible?)

And it wasn't just the above that was incredible- I just feel like I'll be stealing parts of your story if I paste them into a review...but oh my gosh, there was some real beauty in your words this chapter.

I feel like I'm bothering you, by reviewing again...like I'm not worthy to even address you. Your talent is just...just amazing! You're ten times better than half the stuff on modern bookshelves right now!

Oh my gosh, there was so much win in this chapter.

I actually got who Dick's friends were, which was amazing (well, for me). i really loved the idea. You're a genius.

On that topic, you're a comical genius. I lost count of all my favourite quotes to copy and paste into this review. There were too many golden ones. It was amazing.

I just loved this chapter.

The whole idea with the texting was also really smart and cool- I don't see any good ones happen on FF, so this was the exception! Because yours was not good...it was fabulous! Hhahah. Loved it.

I love seeing have subtly Arty and Wally are becoming friends. I kept getting a warm feeling in my chest. like seriously. I really think you're showing the progression impeccably, and I can't wait to read on.

Oh my gosh! This chapter was hilarious:

"That's gross!" Artemis grimaced and twisted away from him. "Swallow before you talk!"

He gulped down the popcorn and smirked at her. "That's what she said…"

She grabbed the pillow behind her and smacked his shoulder with it, nearly transforming the popcorn in his bowl into his own personal blanket. "Grow up! And that doesn't even make sense!"

I actually peed. I rolled off my bed and just laughed like a mad-man.

Seriously, all of the innuendos, and witty-statements in this chapter were funny, but...also showed an awesome writer. Not many people can add such a great comical aspect to their story, while keeping the characters in character!

Awesome.

Amazing! I don't know how you feel about people reviewing every chapter, but I might just do it.

This was written so well, and my heart was jut bursting with rainbows. Like seriously, this was adorable and the descriptions were amazing.

Love your writing!

This was so amazing!

AHHH the proposal was sooo adorable!

Awwwwww! That was adorable! Wally's version of the poem was hilarious! :D

Oooo that's so cute! Artemis's fav shade of green is the same as Wally's eyes... _

OOOOOOOO the TEEN TITANS in High School! :D Love Rae's comments AND OMG WALLY AND ARTEMIS'S TEXTS! I was literally LAUGHING so hard my stomach hurt when i read the part about the termites and the wood, and Wally's reaction. My dad was staring at me like O.O HAHAHAHAHAAA THANKS FOR THE LAUGHS! :D

I mean robin and wally are evil.

Okay you did great. I just found this story and loved it.
You should write a story where Wally and Dick are evil while Artemis and Zatanna are good or the othe way around but there way they try to get the to be good.

Lion king was my shiznit as a kid. I watched it with my sister like fifty bigillion times a day. The conversation using that made me smile, in fact your whole story just makes me smile and laugh! Thank you for the enjoyable read and you have an amazing writing style! Keep it up

I haven't read the rest yet but I guess the teen titans? Totally love this story! :D