|Reviews for five times Eliot caught Parker, one time he didn't|
| EagleJarl chapter 6 . 4/30/2014
First off, evil author is evil for leaving us hanging.
Second, what the heck is plan Z? Clearly it's some sort of last ditch go-to-hell plan for when the world is ending but what is it?!
| imadinorawr chapter 6 . 2/5/2012
| whovian42 chapter 6 . 12/18/2011
Nice clear writing style, good take on the speech patterns, too.
Loved the "his body had long since figured out the correct reflex for that action" sentence. Perfect description of Eliot's physicality, and the way he's taught his body to learn and remember without having to bring 'mind' and 'thought' into the reactions.
Very good one. And I like that you've left the ending open.
| The Girl In The White Scarf chapter 6 . 11/30/2011
Awesome story! I love how you captured the scenes on Chapter 1 till Chapter 4 :D
| Harm Marie chapter 6 . 11/28/2011
Loved this. The mystery makes it better, I think. _
| MythStar Black Dragon chapter 6 . 11/28/2011
That was great loved it was sad and made me feel for elliot. he is such a great guy.
| saides chapter 6 . 11/28/2011
Wow! So painful to think about any negative outcome!
I will think positively!
Thanks for a great series!
| Harm Marie chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
Really loved this one.
| b-mystique chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
Simply fab!Loved this:-)
| saides chapter 5 . 10/16/2011
Amazing! Really great!
| b-mystique chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
Really captured El and his voice well in this one. I love it!:-)
| Harm Marie chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
| MythStar Black Dragon chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
THAT was great love it
| jd chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
nice take on the the 12 step job and i like the idea that eliot felt like he need to be there to catch her rather than being a job on his part... great job
| b-mystique chapter 3 . 9/16/2011