|Reviews for No Time Like the Present|
| msmhawkins chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
This was a joy to read! Truly wish it had happened on the actual show! Great work!
| Leppy99 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
Awwwwwww so cute
Can u continue this story
| ladyevenstar22 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
a shame this is a one shot missy cause you scored great ! loved it!
| chrisfaithalin chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I like the idea of where this story is going, but I couldn't finish because there were too many editing mistakes. Here are a couple examples:
"And seen as this was alt-world..." Normally it would be "seeing as" but since this story is in the past tense it should be avoided, not changed to "seen as".
"As it turns out Daniel was a very good kisser." The rest of the story is in past tense so it should be "it turned out".
"Trust her to even in an alternate reality, but then as she recalled Amanda was far from monogamous, and with Daniel's half-brother of all people." This sentence is a fragment and has no complete thought in it. Trust her to what?
I'm trying not to be nit picky but there are a lot more, these are just some examples. For me, the grammar mistakes just became too distracting. I would work on editing or getting a good beta because the story idea seems interesting and your writing itself is good.
| Betty Bonita chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
REally Hot! I love it!
| kataragurl27 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
i like it
| marielgm22 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Please write mooooore, I really enjoyed your story! XD
| DudeYouJustTotallyStoleMyCar chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Aww cute story, i really liked it. Favourited!
| Sin-t-a-h chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
| astra chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
| Agentcaroline chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Hot! I wish they would have had THAT in the show. ;). Is this a one shot or are you going to continue the story? I can't wait to read your other stories too.