Reviews for Twilight
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I enjoyed your story here.

Thanks for writing and sharing it.
Robin.D chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
that wasa hell of a good story :o) :o) :o) :o)
Rose Unspindle chapter 1 . 4/5/2013

Lot's of typos though.
chanur chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Sweet. Loved it
BalletDancer14 chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Les Amants chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
kage kitsune 14 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Holy shit. That was one chapter? Wow. Great story.
chips-n-gravy chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
This is so good! You have amazing writing, and you have used it very well!
Sabine X

P.S. I know this story is complete- I am just following it so that I can read it again if desired, but I won't put it on favourites as only a select few might make the cut..
saudade do coracao chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
I've been looking for Jasper/Bella stories all night and this was the first one that satisfied me. I don't think you needed the backstories of all the characters, but I did like the reaction you wrote for Bella when she heard Jasper's. This was very romantic and it hit the spot. :)
Lunasea chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Please add another chapter this is so good and I love Jasper! Peter is a hoot I really dig this.
pwrmom2 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
I usually avoid be shots because they always leave me wanting mor. Ths was no exception. Livedit
Bell 1 chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I'm sorry, but I need to say, I ended up doing something I never do...skimmed. For a one shot story, most of the details you gave were just not needed. This would have been better accepted as a multiple chapter story. Most one-shot stories aren't more than 8,000-10,000 words and are meant to be "quicker" stories.

Your writing is good. The story isn't a bad story AT ALL. You just REALLY need to break it into a multiple chapter story so it can be better enjoyed and better accepted. Thank you for your version of Twilight. Yes, Jasper is really a good character and one I enjoy also.

Keep up the good writing. :D
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
An interesting view of the twilight story.
miss.salvatore1995 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Great story! I absolutely loved it. It was so cute and you are an amazing author!
starnosy chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This is an amazing story hun. I really enjoyed my time reading it. Thank you for this.

The only thing I had missed was the kiss between both. It would have been so great if they had kissed each other in the end. I would have loved to read how you describe the moment and what Bella would have felt through her first kiss with Jasper.
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