|Reviews for Twilight|
| NatTheHippieChild chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Wonderful job, love the build up and pretty much the whole thing!
| torchwood1890 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
You do great Jasper/Bella stories! You should write more of them. I really like the character dynamics in this one. You do a great job with your character development in all your stories. You shuold get insomnia more often if it produces this quality work. Great job!
| ShadowGoddess1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
One of the reasons I've always hated the Bella/Edward pairing is because I always hated the thought of a young woman giving up her whole life (a life that hasn't really began yet) for a man. I never thought love should be only one person in the relationship sacrificing it all. It was hard to quell those thoughts while reading this, because Jasper was basically in Edward's role. I mostly read it because I enjoy your writing.
| Madame Director chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
This is one of the few one-shots that I actually like. Usually there isn't enough character development possible in so few words so unless they're particularly good porn, one-shots bore me. That said, this was very good and I enjoyed it very much.
| i'm in the looney bin chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
:) love all these new stories you're posting - sry not able review all phone being a pain
| baseballmom3d chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I really enjoyed this story, it was amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I am really liking the Jasper/Bella pairing after this story.
| sblack814 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
WOW! Your wrighting style is truly amazing. I cant wait to see more.
| LuvinTwilight143 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I love it :)
I want more!
| jagnic233 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
OMG this so can't be a one shot, are you kidding me, DONT STOP keep writing, this i swear has to be one of the best bella/jas stories i have read on this site..PLEASE keep it going. at least another chapter or 2
| twimama77 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
So very very awesome
| together24x3 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
I loved it, of course! I don't know how you do it, so many amazing stories. Please keep it up,lol!
| Owley chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
This was wonderful, I really liked how you changed up the pairing, and that you made Bella a more stable, strong person. I think she would be great with Jazz!
| feelingcowgirlish chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
| hlwareham chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
another brilllint story from you. i cannot wait to read more and see what happens in the future with her change.