|Reviews for Twilight|
| annonomous and annoyed chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Edward was not dying from the plague he was dying from the Spanish influenza if u r going to write storys have ur facts right thnks
| angel897 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
| 2015meg chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
AWWWWW! That CAN'T be it! There HAS to be more chapters, so that we know how the relationship is! PLLLLLEEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE continue!
| Dark Angel 5120 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
~Peace Out! )
| darinka chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I hope you decide to continue it.
Its a great story!
| LovelyGirl51 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
One Word: AWESOME
Well, fourteen words if you count the introduction plus these words.
| NatTheHippieChild chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Wonderful job, love the build up and pretty much the whole thing!
| torchwood1890 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
You do great Jasper/Bella stories! You should write more of them. I really like the character dynamics in this one. You do a great job with your character development in all your stories. You shuold get insomnia more often if it produces this quality work. Great job!
| ShadowGoddess1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
One of the reasons I've always hated the Bella/Edward pairing is because I always hated the thought of a young woman giving up her whole life (a life that hasn't really began yet) for a man. I never thought love should be only one person in the relationship sacrificing it all. It was hard to quell those thoughts while reading this, because Jasper was basically in Edward's role. I mostly read it because I enjoy your writing.
| Madame Director chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
This is one of the few one-shots that I actually like. Usually there isn't enough character development possible in so few words so unless they're particularly good porn, one-shots bore me. That said, this was very good and I enjoyed it very much.
| i'm in the looney bin chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
:) love all these new stories you're posting - sry not able review all phone being a pain
| baseballmom3d chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I really enjoyed this story, it was amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I am really liking the Jasper/Bella pairing after this story.
| sblack814 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
WOW! Your wrighting style is truly amazing. I cant wait to see more.
| LuvinTwilight143 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I love it :)
I want more!
| jagnic233 chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
OMG this so can't be a one shot, are you kidding me, DONT STOP keep writing, this i swear has to be one of the best bella/jas stories i have read on this site..PLEASE keep it going. at least another chapter or 2