|Reviews for It was Harry|
| Fourmille d'idees chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
"You don't sneak around to see best friend's, you sneak around to see lovers" Exactly!
Ahhh! Sometime Neville being good can get annoying! Can't he see there is romance taking place? Csn't they get like... an hour? Or two? Or a night...
Headboy Neville reminds me of eleven year old Neville. 'Cept he's way cooler.
Of COURSe McGonagall won't be thrilled! She's is the fair teacher! Which is usually great, except when it works against them...
Hah! Corner: 0, Harry: 1(00000000000000000)
Ah, young love *Dreamy sigh*...
| Twilight738475528 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
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| A Girl who Fans chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
very entertaining! :) i love it!
| AsterLea chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Thank you for entering the competition- you will receive your score after October 31!
| ephemereis chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Very interesting story! I like your characterisation of Michael Corner. I never really thought about him, but it seems that he would be bitter that Ginny dumped him once (I didn't expect him to be that bitter, though).
The little flashback about Mrs Weasley finding Ron and Hermione and not Harry and Ginny together in bed was funny. It seems like a sort of foreshadowing for McGonagall possibly knowing it was Harry who jinxed Neville and Michael...
And the part about Neville being Head Boy was awesome!
However, there are a few problems with the punctuation and grammar. They don't detract too much from the story, but I'm sort of a SPaG (spelling, punctuation and grammar) Nazi and I just thought I'd tell you :P I could point out the errors if you want.
I'd help beta (for SPaG only, since my plots are kinda fail) but unfortunately I don't meet the requirements yet D:
But overall, good job!
| acciomysteriousbubbles chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
| Rani Jashalithie chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Wow...That was really really good!
Totally unexpected, totally off-guard, but totally hilarious!
| DarkDramaLady chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Nice :) love the last spoken line :)