|Reviews for Nen ono weohnata, Arya Dröttningu|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
Its ok its not sick like dragons in heat i now have nightmares about eragon murtagh and thorn
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
this was a very good story and i liked it alot, but maybe i should skipped past the "blush" explicit content.
| a fan chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
What does that title translate to?
| J.S.C chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Absolutely incredible. I found a few spelling and grammatical errors and while I can't remember them off hand I'll go back and edit my review so you may find them. My opinion is that while Paolini felt that such a possibility as this would be against Arya's character, I feel you introduced it rather well. Though if you had written more and explained how she changed making this possible it would have added to the legitimacy of the story. Still, I loved every line and plan to read the sequel!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Ummmmmm, What grade levels is this story for?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Terriffic needs sequel, i really enjoyed this read first time i read something like it.
| Mitch chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Excellent work. You might consider adding more to the story. Another chapter is in order; expand the tale and tell us what happens between Eragon and Arya after the events outlined here. You've raised a lot of issues (i.e. killing Galby, beating the Empire, restoring peace, developing Arya and Eragon's relationship, and telling Islanzadi about it) but have solved precious few. Don't leave us hanging.
Overall, though, well done. The grammar was very well done, especially compared to some others I've read, and there are a few mistakes, but only a few.
| Kuroiikawa chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
This story was fantastic and I thank you for it. I skipped the lemon, since I don't enjoy the details, but the story was very well written and reminiscent of Paolini's writing style. I enjoyed it thoroughly and hope to see more.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
well thought out easy to read good job at balancing the emontial context with eargon and ayra. its a shame that christopher wanted to have his series remain PG only, i think he would have done better had he inculded a chapter and plot similar to yours. a good start for a young writer keep at it.
| Tamer-El chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
This is something I forgot to put on He Will Not, and I realized I didn't review this one. Most people don't know how or just don't in general, put romance and a lemon together, but you, you do an amazing job by not making it too porny. You actually make it romantic, so good job! Oh, and put a sequel to this
| kingonoobs chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Could you write another chapter?..please?
| xXColdFusion13Xx chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Amazing story man
| Dodal chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
This was very good, very good indeed. you should have made it longer, that was he only flaw that i noticed.
| Ghostalusion chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Really enjoyed it and liked the ending
| Jimmie Mitchell chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
NEXT ONE NOW!