Reviews for On the Fall
DawnfireJazz chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
A good story, very sad, Poor Prowl and Bluestreak. Just curious but that other mech Prowl saw wouldn't be Smokescreen would it?
moonlightbeam305 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
This was so sad...but I really enjoyed it!
Bernarde chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I like where this seems to be going. This chapter was a little short compared to your usual stuff, but that's all right. My question is... who was the sparkling? Bluestreak?
renegadewriter8 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Awwww poor Prowl! T.T I liked your description of Praxus, very well done. *hugs Prowl*
ThePeacefulKnight chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
awww, I love it :)