|Reviews for The Tale of the Leaf Hurricane|
| Critic chapter 1 . 2/21
The problem with crossovers is that the portrayal of characters from two differing worlds has to be strong. Are you trying to show a clash of diverse levels of strength & abilities in this story? Because if not, i personally think that is the climax of the story. It shows promise though, so please keep working on it. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Hi, new reader here. Cool plot, and I have some feedback, i think it would be a lot better not to squeeze a whole chunk of dialogue together, as this may seem a little disorganised & may put off the reader. Additionally, maybe add a few more descriptions so that d reader can further imagine in greater detail? Overall, it shows promise. :)
| 2n2kas chapter 13 . 12/12/2013
In my opinion this story doesn't really distinguish those that are supposed to be really strong and those that are weaker. A prime example is the fight between Erza and Gray's rag tag team, there's no way that gray could have come even close to defeating her at that part of the timeline, even with help, you're making it look like anyone can defeat someone whose supposed to be much stronger than them (well that could work, if you know from the very start who you're going to face, but in all of the fights (except naruto's) no one knew who they're gonna be fighting against!), then what's the point of the S class?
Also i'm wondering why does naruto look so weak? I mean he has a shit ton of battle experience, his reflexes and so many more things from his previous life and they count for jack-shit for some reason... That alone would allow him to beat someone like gray with no problems, but those factors just went poof for some reason...
And another thing, why's the exam almost an exact replica of the tenrou exam?
| TRAFALGARLAWSGURL22 chapter 20 . 11/7/2013
i hope you update this story soon its really good
| upset chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
hey bro pls continue the story
| Me'o D Theguh chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
| Jose19 chapter 6 . 9/7/2013
Naruto is taking part in the "S" Class Exams but does he have enough skill and power to beat all these tough opponents in front of him.
| Jose19 chapter 5 . 9/7/2013
I see that Naruto is getting along well with all his guild members, and I want to see if he can find Wendy but will Naruto get stronger over time because the enemies that will attack Fairy Tail are pretty powerful, and if he wants to advance as a "S" class mage then he needs to get a whole lot stronger than he is right now.
| Jose19 chapter 4 . 9/7/2013
I can't wait to see who Naruto pairs up with because Fairy Tail has a impressive selection of beautiful women to choose from, and Naruto will get along rather well in this Guild.
| Jose19 chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
This story is really good by the way, and can you tell me when are you updating your other stories because you got a good selection of fine stories that you are writing.
| Jose19 chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
I got a question because Grandeeney is the Dragon that taught Wendy her Sky Dragon Magic then what would this make Naruto, and I wonder what type of abilities will Naruto have in this world because Sky Dragon Magic has both support and attack magic in its repertoire but will this all be that Naruto knows.
| Jose19 chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
This is a rather nice introduction to a new story of Naruto and Fairy Tail, which by the way is one of my favorite type of crossovers to make because I love all the characters because they are all unique and exciting.
| aaasas chapter 15 . 7/31/2013
Apa-apaan naruto ga sama kya di chap prologue lebih lemah SAMA IN DONK TOLOL
| Taira Yukiko chapter 20 . 7/14/2013
interesting hole to read more soon please update :)
| nafara chapter 20 . 6/21/2013
"Hey is this fanfic dead cause you havn't updated in 9 month's"