|Reviews for Stay|
| gibbyreader chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
nice way to it there :)
| Hi no Hime chapter 4 . 11/13/2011
I liked this one a lot. Everyone was in character and the plot didn't seem to strech what was possible. I also really liked the part with Hughes' ghost at the end. Very well done.
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 4 . 9/23/2011
So Roy's supposed to be keeping her fever down…he's failing. For a second there I thought they were gunna have sex. That surely would've made her temperature go up. XD
What happens When she gets better? Will she think it was a hallucination? That should be a bonus chapter.
I love how Maes is there. :'( I miss him.
| Glacey chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
That was so cute! I loved your story until the very end!
| PokemonFreak90 chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
Oh, man. This story is a million times better than the actual original FMA ending! Looking forward to their love confession in the next part!
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
HURRAY FOR ALPHONSE!
Gotta love Alex too. XD
If she turns over and sees Roy right next to her in TE next chapter, I'll probably have another spazz attack. Yes I said another because Al getting his body back made he flip the fuck out. XDDD
| Glacey chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Somehow when I first watched that episode I kinda hoped somethigng like this would happen since Roy was always the one who got injured in the first Fullmetal Alchemist. It made me sad.
It makes me super happy to see this you have no idea. Keep up the good work! :D
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
Roy, you'll alway find a reason to not tell her, so why don't you just do it already?
I'm glad Riza finally woke up.
Please update soon.
| xXxRizaHawkeyexXx chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
i love your story so far!
i can't wait till they decide to confess! D
| PokemonFreak90 chapter 2 . 9/13/2011
So far, so good. But try to explain things a little better. If this story is AU and not going to follow the exact events of FMA, explain what's changed and what you added in its place instead.
For instance, You mentioned Ed and Al at the beginning of the chapter. How did Ed get back from the other side of the gate? Did Al still lose his memory?
Keep my advice in mind, and keep writing! I love the story, so far.
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Well that was incredibly depressing.
Good writing though.
| DamagedCargo chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Oh my! What a twist! This was very suspenseful oh my god... Lol please update soon!
| PokemonFreak90 chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Did Archer still manage to take out Mustang's eye or did Riza get to him before he shot?
P.S. I agree. Brotherhood is a million times better.