Reviews for Long Road Home
Arabella Whitlock chapter 10 . 9/28/2014
This chaƶter was AMAZING.
Arabella Whitlock chapter 9 . 9/28/2014
I love these moments between bella and jasper.
Arabella Whitlock chapter 8 . 9/28/2014
I think Carlisle should kick edward out from their family.
Arabella Whitlock chapter 7 . 9/28/2014
Argh! Hope they would burn Edward!
And did they realize that Edward was the one left Bella?
Arabella Whitlock chapter 6 . 9/28/2014
I liked Bella's and Jasper's talk.
Arabella Whitlock chapter 5 . 9/28/2014
Can't wait to see bella's reaction when she meets The Whitlocks
Arabella Whitlock chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
Edward really needs some butt kicking
Arabella Whitlock chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
It seems rosalie does care afterall
Arabella Whitlock chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
So sad
Arabella Whitlock chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Interesting start.
GeezerWench chapter 15 . 9/28/2014
I kinda think Edward needed to lose more than his arms and a couple fingers for a while. He was such a little bitch! It was all his fault.

I liked how you characterized everyone. Of course, I especially liked Jasper.

Enjoyed this story very much! Well done and well written. You put it together well. Enjoyed it all the way through, even the very sad parts.

Very good!
GeezerWench chapter 12 . 9/28/2014
Beautiful chapter from Jasper's point of view.
GeezerWench chapter 8 . 9/28/2014
Fuckin'-A.

Nobody beat his ass.
GeezerWench chapter 7 . 9/28/2014
I have been enjoying this story so much!

I cannot believe Edward ripped up Bella's pictures and the baby bootie! Who in the bloody fucking hell does he think he is? She had that "normal, happy human life" and he destroyed the only remaining remnants of it!

what? Was she supposed to put herself in a convent?

I hope Rosalie and the rest of them rip that shitty ass piece of dung into a million pieces and scatter them across North America.

What the FUCK was his reason for ripping up her things?
Guest chapter 15 . 9/6/2014
I love really all your history
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