|Reviews for This is a Herculean Thing|
| tamashiyuki chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
| Demi3456 chapter 9 . 12/3/2013
Love it hope u contiune
| Moka-girl chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
You should invest in a beta. The story could be so much more if you did. There are several mistakes that I picked up within reading the first lines of this (In big letters are the corrected parts):
Harry turned around when he heard a female voice callING.
He had decided to live there A few months after the final battle.
Harry stood up and walked OVER to them, dragging his big trunk behind him.
Harry looked up and gave her a sad smile before noddING.
The dark sky and cold eyeS greeted them as they stepPED outside.
(As for dialogues, you should know that they do have punctuation too:
"Yes," he said.
See how the 'he' is written? It's in the middle of the sentence, so it shouldn't be written 'He'. If it isn't part of the sentence, you'd see something like this:
"Yes." He turned around and started walking away.
So I think you understand what I mean when I say that you should get a beta. Don't take it as an insult to your writing - this is supposed to be advice.)
| crotia chapter 5 . 8/24/2013
Nice, idea for them to find out
| crotia chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
| jkljnjnlj chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
gtrad story, please continued. will hermione and harry be pregnant? why draco must die?
| n.n chapter 7 . 3/6/2013
| Padfootkicksbutt chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
this is great so far! i look forward to reading more!
| domsijohn chapter 9 . 11/16/2012
i hope draco was still alive
| hannah chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
| MzBellezza chapter 9 . 10/1/2012
is draco really dead can hew be in a coma bc of the weird ancient magic in the forest? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
| twistyguru chapter 9 . 9/29/2012
Aww...smoochies, then everything goes to hell!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
wrong- "It looks like Gryffindor Common Room" Draco commented.
right- "It looks like Gryffindor Common Room," Draco commented.
| Laesk chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
thank you for sharing such an interesting story with us all. i look forwards to reading what is to come
| lil joker 1989 chapter 9 . 9/23/2012
Oh I wonder why they took them instead of killing them on the spot like Draco...