Reviews for Elemental
Fang's Fawn chapter 3 . 7/14/2013
Great story! :-) Well-written and heart-warming. Loved seeing the NSY-ers concern for John, too.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/31/2013
great job!
RiverSong11 chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
This story is awesome!
Woodgie chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
That was fantastic, so thoughtful and simply perfect!
Noremac1 chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
More, right?
LuffyMarra chapter 3 . 9/25/2011
Good story so far. Keep going please.
Niente Zero chapter 3 . 9/13/2011
This is lovely work. Crisp, clean prose, emotionally satisfying without lapsing too far into the sentimental. Very enjoyable!
Jodi2011 chapter 3 . 9/12/2011
Really amazing writing - sorry if I've said that already :)

And thank you for making John better too. The chat between John and Sherlock was handled well, with both staying very much in character. Love that Sherlock now openly calls John his friend and John is already planning Christmas dinner.

Back in chapter 2, John thought... Memories of his captivity are clamoring at him; he pushes through them without examination, abandoning them to the morphine fog. There will be time later to process them and deal with the aftermath... that sounds rather ominous. I do wonder what happened after John was taken as he probably left for Sarah's around 6 or 7pm? And the meeting at the pool wasn't until midnight, leaving Moriarty a few too many hours with John.

Looking forward to more :)
Narnian Sprite chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
So, this is amazing. More please?
Jodi2011 chapter 2 . 9/11/2011
Really nicely written, love all the layers of detail you impart in a few well chosen words. My only complaint is the chapters are too short!

Love Lestrade and his brief description of Sherlock coming round and having to be sedated. But am awfully worried about John. Please make him well :)