Reviews for Nightmare
veniceit chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I Am so glad you did this story. I'm so glad you have embraced writing and not just helping everyone else.

What great little story you have given us. So true to the internal battle Fiona and Eddie have towards each other. Very well written and captured.

When are Fiona and Eddie going to stop be so stubborn and admit to themselves they are crazy about each other and their fighting is just their way of not facing their true feelings. : )

If they weren't wildly attracted to each other they would be indifferent and complacent towards each other, no need to fight...their fights are smoke and mirrors.

Really great story. I can see Eddie having this dream...he felt destroyed over potentially causing harm to's very believable. Love your word choice too, your skilled background shines through when you write.

Please keep them coming here and in the Human Target Forum.

It's great to see Keen Eddie's forum come back to life...
cedricsowner chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
The last part is my favorite. So awwww... Very nice one, love it.
ifwednesdaywasaflowerchild chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I love it :) It seemed so real was just amazing!