Reviews for A Selfish Path
animefanx10001 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I hope you write more Because this is awesome! Wish it was more but what's done is done xD
Animefanx10001 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
I hope you write more
dramaq chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Beautiful fic-let. You managed to capture so very much in so few words. I do believe this is the hottest M scene I've read that is written in such a tasteful way. I describe it as tasteful because you used general terms and euphemism extremely effectively and didn't go into the explicit details. That takes a considerable amount of skill. The one thing I would suggest would be to limit your usage of the passive voice, i.e. "the touch of skin was being sought." Action verbs work better in these cases.

Great job!
tb-chan chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
It was good
Joybug chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
there really should be more fics on this pairing. I love Kou x Akira. XD! great fic!

very hot! I wish it was longer though.

I hope you write more of this pairing.