|Reviews for When She Smiles|
| c00kieguirl chapter 7 . 1/13/2012
Strong chapter, clean of spelling errors, which is good. Very realistic.
| c00kieguirl chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
I am highly anticipating the next chapter. It is a very very torturing cliff hanger you have left us to dangle off of.
| c00kieguirl chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
Good buildup and character development. The storyline has a good buildup to teh main event not i just cant wait for the next chapter!
| godschild4ever chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
Thanks so much for updating again! I am really enjoying reading this story! It has a unique plot so i never know what will happen next! Thanks for writing!
| godschild4ever chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
So far I really like this story!It is off to an amazing start! I like getting to see a bit of a different side of Mari. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon! Thank you soooo much for writing!