|Reviews for On Another Path: Volume I|
| rikachan chapter 19 . 12/17/2013
| topgirlalg chapter 19 . 11/29/2013
i love it from the beginning to the end and loved how you mixed some plots and scenes from the real manga to your fic
| Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 15 . 11/14/2013
lovely, the angst, the flippant reaction of usami. i am totally with hiro on this one, how...humliating
| Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 7 . 11/14/2013
very nicely done. felt like he missed something eh? love the illusion to nowaki. will be interesting to see if he pops up.
| Scarlotte O'Hara chapter 4 . 11/14/2013
yow yow yow! very sexy, i admit i don't like this paring, but i don't dislike it. the what ifs ran rampant through my mind at the blindfold part. i love this!
| Vita Orlando chapter 19 . 10/14/2013
Just lovely as usual. Of course a book dedication is the perfect declaration of love for Hiroki.
And as an ending this feels so sweet but not happy in a forced way at all. I can't wait to start in on volume two.
| Vita Orlando chapter 18 . 10/14/2013
Yet another chapter that just sings! The "autumn wind" imagery is perfect here. I feel like it encapsulates the way you manage to make this whole AU pairing feel cannon.
| secant1 chapter 14 . 10/14/2013
I had to set up an account just to comment on this story. I've been simply lurking around for far too long. Your characterizations are absolutely impeccable. You've truly brought these two to life and given them so much depth and dimension through your thoughtful interplay of personlities and emotions. Plus, I always love a little intellect with my angst. Fantastic job. I look forward to Volume II.
| Vita Orlando chapter 17 . 10/13/2013
A perfect reinterpretation of that kick to the head. Hiroki is always feeling things so deeply and not quite able to express himself, his intensity whenever he's upset ends up escaping through a physical pressure valve.
| Vita Orlando chapter 16 . 10/13/2013
I love the description of Akhiko's writer's block: words as snowflakes melting in the hand. It does feel that way to me at times.
Aikawa is so the big sister in this chapter and the last.
| Vita Orlando chapter 15 . 10/13/2013
This scene between Hiroki and Aikawa is sweet, and you know, I've never actually thought about writing a scene of the two of them, but of course they'd know each other at least a bit. Definite food for thought.
I also love Hiroki's silence, the imagery of him not moving the books Akihiko stacked, even while he still doesn't reach out at all. Perfectly in character for Hiroki, and illustrates the level of equality of these two men.
| Vita Orlando chapter 14 . 10/13/2013
I owe you many reviews on this piece, because I can read on my phone, but typing is a pain. Hopefully I won't bombard your inbox too much.
You've totally sold me on this pair, which I was ambivalent on from the start. Traitorous is right, I totally feel youI love Romantica, and I love Misaki, but I can't get enough novelist! Interesting jumping off point for the idea that there is no such thing as "One True Love" or "Soulmates" just possibilities and history.
And these poor dear boys! What a fight. I'm feeling so much tension and sadness for them right now.
As always, the plays on cannon moments in a completely different context are brilliant and so much fun.
| SuzukiChiyeko chapter 19 . 10/12/2013
Oh man, I'd been reading so much angst that I practically screamed with joy when it got a bit more cheerful at the end. I'm growing too attached to this couple xD
| SuzukiChiyeko chapter 14 . 10/12/2013
This is so sad T_T Yet, I'm kind of proud of Akihiko's reaction; it sounded really understanding and mature, even if he was crying.
Thank you for updating :)
| barettachante chapter 19 . 10/11/2013
This story could end right here and it would be perfect!
Hugs and kisses to you, my literary genius!