I don't know how to put into words how awestruck I am by this. I am, 199% a Jeyna shipper and this is probably the best oneshot about them I have read. Great job. I am so amazed by this, and I love how you wrote it and the ending is perfect. I also thought it was funny when she called Percy an idiot. I can completely see her saying that - actually I can perfectly picture her saying everything you've written here.

This is really good.

ohmygosh. you're too good.

this is really good and sad... never would have guessed it was your first oneshot :) really good :)

That was really depressing and almost made me cry. Jayna are sort of reminiscent of Thaluke in my opinion, but I digress. I love how you wrote those memories between. I feel terribly for Reyna.

This is sad. Makes me feel the memories. Very good though. You seem like a pro at writing one-shots.

I loved the story. Sad but it could happen. I about cried!

That was really good and touching, it was hard to catch on to who was talking though

"You attempted to casually walk over to my table.

You tripped."

Lol, I loved that part! :D

I like your one-shots. You should write more of 'em. ;)

I really like how you protrayed the passing of time. Very well written story. Great story!