Reviews for Stiles' sitting
Guest chapter 5 . 7/22/2012
coach- leads a team
couch- a long,cushion-y platform for relaxing

teem- filled with/infested with (Chuck E. Cheese is teeming with children)
team- a sports team

rap- to tap/knock or mix verses of poetry w/ music
wrap- to enclose

stud- a male that would make a good breeder
stood- to stand, past tense

your- possessive, it belongs to you, therefore it is yours
you're- contraction of you are

Get a beta, these aren't even half of the mistakes I noticed, just the most prominant ones. I'm not trying to be a bitch about this but repeatedly making mistakes like this can turn an otherwise good piece of writting into a joke.
Luna Ackles chapter 6 . 7/19/2012
Hey! Cool story! Is there another chapter?
17BrazilianBabe chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
Oh so cute
17BrazilianBabe chapter 2 . 7/16/2012
sweet 3
17BrazilianBabe chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
AWWWW!
No pen names left chapter 2 . 7/13/2012
You need a beta...good story but spelling was ... Not flaming. Just saying. I liked this a lot.
Dereksgirl24 chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
Awww lol
dreamer2322 chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
Love the new chapter and can't wait for update soon :)
Nifters chapter 5 . 10/3/2011
lol. that was cute. what amused me the most however was the dreadful amount of spelling mistakes (not in your story) in that final paragraph explaining why. 3
dreamer2322 chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
Love this! :)
Nekaaa chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
hehe it was cute :)
hehe chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
laptop*
Murasaki Tsuki chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
even though it was short it was very adorable! Update soon!
Dereksgirl24 chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
It was defo agley short. But it was good
fan chapter 5 . 10/2/2011
loved it
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