Reviews for Tales of Vesperia: Courting Hardships
Panda chapter 6 . 3/22/2015
OmG! SO BEAUTIFUL! Please Do More! :D
fionamoto chapter 6 . 1/6/2012
This was such an enjoyable read, nicely written filled with sweet moments.
fairytaleweaver chapter 6 . 10/8/2011
Aww, that was sweet. 3
Month4 chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
Wow, this was great. Keep going. Maybe continue into raising Zoe Lowell. I could be interesting.
741AuthorNCS chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
I was right on the money!

Back to the seriousness, I have a few things to comment on your writing style.

-The overall are corny to read.

-You used "Said" way too often.

-The scenes aren't detailed enough. Meaning beside the character dialogs, everything else are forgettable. (By forgettable I mean I could just read the character's speeches and ignored everything else because I played the game.)

But beside all of that, THIS IS AWESOME!
devilhamster chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
wow thanks for telling me this sequel of yours. man worst people sure are everywhere huh. i sure would like to beat up that so call leader of purple lightning. anyway wonderful chapters. i cant wait for them to save estelle and for the baby to be born.
741AuthorNCS chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
I had seen too much OCs with the same personality with Giselle... So I find her borin- *Is shot*
741AuthorNCS chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
This is gonna be short isn't it?
Gxmwp-Arisa chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Keep going D
741AuthorNCS chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
Poor Karol...

Now where to find a pregnant lady?
741AuthorNCS chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Yes! Sequel time!