Reviews for the girl with all the problems
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Capitalization seems for many amatur writers an arduous task, ehich most neglect. Please, make "i" in "I". Not only does it look more visualy pleasing, but it looks neater and more professional. As professional as fanfiction can be. I'm no english major, and I am terrible at criticising poems. However, it is also important to have spaces. Your summary seemed to have enough space left to add them. Or you could simply write, "Summary Inside," if there isn't enough space. Although, that can deter potential readers.
tatiana chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
How sad