|Reviews for Becoming a Master|
| OseanSoldier chapter 26 . 3/3
Great chapter again. I am all to familiar with "chapter too long, I quit modz" Reached 14k once and was just done. I look forward to what your next chapter/story will bring.
| Anonytodd chapter 26 . 3/1
Wow. Um. Wow. You've just given my nightmares more fuel, you know.
That creepy bitch Nialee will be starring in them. From now on. Wow.
| Anata-wo chapter 25 . 2/6
Wait. WAIT. NO FRIGGIN WAY ARE YOU STOPPING THIS HERE. DX Whhhhyyyyy? I was like, oh I can read one more chapter, and then you pulled THIS crap! Write another one, right NAO. :
Ok, first off, and I totally would have forgotten about these if I hadn't gone back after reading he ending here, who the hell is Nikki? That creepy Froslass mentioned her, and it's gonna bug me. Also, Shiro is hot, Violet is lucky, and I wish he'd been around for longer. *all drama, all the time* Indigo had better be good looking, or I'mma quit. I need my fangirl feels, or I shall die. *ok, I'll read anyways. Still*
Aaaannnd, I just left a huge review, so you should be done now. Right? Right. XD Finish. Hurry. Wait, no don't finish, drag the story on forever so it never ends. :D GAH, going away now.
| Commando64 chapter 25 . 2/6
Quite. Simply. One of the best pokemon Fics I have ever read. I would love it so much if you can update.
| Thousandcrystals chapter 24 . 1/31
I finally got around to reading the new chapter, and I'll have you know I actually cried. Indigo outdid himself in terms of sheer power and maturity. Masterfully written, in a way that exceeded all my wildest expectations for a followup. This is honestly written like a movie. You play our emotions like a stupid harp.
Until next time, good bye.
| Lolicon finale chapter 25 . 1/31
Oh screw it, I shouldn't have read this one until the next one was ouuuttt! *whines uncontrollably* I'm done. I'm going to go try and find another story half as good as this one until the next chapter comes out. I may die in the meantime.
| Lolicon numbah 3 chapter 24 . 1/31
You are forgiven, due only to the awesome chapter. This bit was brutal on my poor fangirl feels. T_T I'm in a review-y mood right now, so you get another one! And probably one more if I finish the next chappie tonight.
Indigo is by far the most interesting character. I still cannot decide if he or Violet is the main character here.
| Lolicon numbah 2 chapter 23 . 1/31
(already left a detailed review on rest of story) Oh. Oh you did NOT just kill my favorite ditto in a bloodbath. I liked that thing! A lot! If it stays dead, you are in so much trouble! :(
| Lolicon chapter 22 . 1/31
Ok, like five things. First off, your story? It rocks. It's too long, and some chapters need major cleaning, but the base is sound, and I've really enjoyed it. These characters are engaging and relatable, and frankly seem to have a life of their own. Violet ties everything together more than anyone. Without her, this story would fall apart like a building made of jello. I'm really, really looking forward to finding out what happens next. (I'm almost done with available chapters, so I figured I'd get that out there now) You've inspired me to write my own fanfiction, especially since this appears to be your very first and it's awesome. Thanks much, and write more!
| ShinyEsp chapter 25 . 1/24
Well, I just found this story, and I have a few things to say about it.
The first thing I thought was 'hell no it's another Lucario story fml I'm out'.
The second thing I thought was 'wait what the hell is going on I have to keep reading'.
The third thing I thought was 'wait what the hell when did I get twenty-five chapters in'.
And the final thing, that I am currently thinking, is 'what's gonna happen next?'
So don't leave us hanging, KagoTori! Keep up the good writing! :P
| Sahjil chapter 25 . 1/23
WHOA! Awesome chapter. I knew something was going to happen, but I didn't expect this. Great job. I hope to see the next chapter soon. I just can't wait. :D
| OseanSoldier chapter 25 . 1/22
First, your story isn't stupid. Second, I like longer stories. The first story I read in the site was a 300k beast. Third, that ending... It can go so many ways... Okay two... But still.. It's yet another cliff hanger that you do that drives me mental. In a good way maybe?
Anyway, this chapter was absolutely amazing and I look forward to your next chapter! I cannot wait to see how you end this story. Also makes me wonder what you will do after it is finished.
| AngelaSparx chapter 9 . 1/8
Wow, Violet has a secret? Weird. But character development is nice.
This story rocks. I love it so much!
| Sahjil chapter 24 . 1/8
And yet again another amazing chapter! I wonder what the secret is...Keep up the great work. :D
| OseanSoldier chapter 24 . 1/8
wow... great job again. Glad you found a way to keep writing. I enjoy this story far too much and would have been disappointment if it just faded off without being complete.
Overall this chapter was amazing. The scene with Indigo vs Tara was masterfully written and quite engaging. I kind of feel bad for her now. She just have felt terrible after what happened and she just bottled it up.
Anyways, I look forward to your next chapter and congratulations on 200 reviews, I still have a way to go till I reach that mark. And thanks for the cyber cookie!