|Reviews for The Duel|
| nancylou chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Poor zhat never stood a chance against the green eyed, blond huntsman, with his bless'd steel. LOL
What is funny, is that the zhat was red while alive and blue when she was dead.
I think your med level is just right.
| Heartless BytchhakaHelenBach1 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
This was a fun read. All children's poems should go something like this. Just think of the years of counseling they'd enjoy as adults!
| LivingForTv chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
That was VERY good! Especially the last line.
| Twinchy chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
LOL, now that was something else for sure, Silver.
| Dizzo chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Love the poetry drabble - that's not easy!
I'm not familiar with the poem you based this on, but I love the story it told, especially the line; 'When the blond boy entered, there was such a riot!'
Isn't that just Dean all over?
Great job x
| dnachemlia chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Whichever produces more like this, that's what you do ;)
| Spirit Burner AKA Chick Feed chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Your drabble's so cool,
You totally rule.
I loved the whole thing,
But who was that watching?
I so want to know,
Cos I'm a nosey so and so. :D
| MeAzrael chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Wow, this is poetry after my liking :-) Wild and eccentric and thrilling and not too long ;-) "They slashed at each other, bone claws and bless'd steel" – ah, that's awesome. Very well done, as far as I can tell ...
| maybe-moey chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I like the direction this one has taken. You should probably write more like this ;D
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Different, unique use of the word so well done.
| Meggin Lane chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I'm not familiar with the poem that inspired you but the rhyming was great in yours none the less. I also thought, wickedly, that a bit of prose by Dr. Suese would do well too.
Imagine the Winchesters being called in to clean up the infestion of numbered minions brought forth by the Cat in the Hat. Hhhhhmmm, Dean covered in pink sticky goo... sighs. What would a Winchester do, if covered all over in pink sticky goo?
| sylia91 chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
| 1983Sarah chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I love it! So great! Totally inspired, I love how you melded "The Duel" in with "Supernatural!
| mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Off the rails? Who cares! Its great to stretch your writing wings and try something different. I've done it a few times and some of the folks here have not really "gotten" it - I vote for keeping your meds just the same!
| Madd Aless chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
It was very cute.