Reviews for Journey Through the Stars
final flash chapter 3 . 1/26/2006
i love this fic, you've captured the characters well and your use of language and descriptive talent is very impressive.

i especially liked the Terrada bar scene. whenever i write bar scenes i seem to pack them with too much detail and get bogged down. well done and please write more!

i also suggest posting your fic on the DBFFL (dragonball fanfiction library), there are many authors and fics there.
wazzzuupp chapter 3 . 6/7/2005
Hi,

I just read your fanfiction. Great Work! I wanna see what happens next! Please? I have to know what happens! XD
Sawnya chapter 3 . 11/17/2004
YAY! You updated! And I like it! I love the little touches you put in this chapter with Jeice's obsession with porn and the Ginyu Force about to go bowling. I can see someone like Jeice spending all his free time ogling women. Those guys are always great for comic relief, even though we all know how dangerous they can be.

I'm looking forward to seeing more. Good to see your work back here again. )
Karete-chan chapter 3 . 11/13/2004
yay! Star you finally updated!

Story gets interesting...but, you know me, it has Zarbon in it so...yeah.

*shakes head* You're about the only person I know who would have Jiece looking up porn sites...as opposed to Recoome.

PLease don't give up on this, cause it really is a wonderful idea. And your crossovers really do work. lol. I should know. P
Elenek chapter 3 . 11/10/2004
I really like the detail in this and the way you move around. Keep up the good work. -El-
denia chapter 3 . 11/10/2004
Cool story , like it really realy much

please upstate _

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speedwithlife chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
hi. longtime no see. anyhoo. i've updated before the death and poses. and you'll LOVE this chapter. :evil grin: particualry the ending of it. so read/review :puppy eyes: pwease
speedwithlife chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
hi. longtime no see. anyhoo. i've updated before the death and poses. and you'll LOVE this chapter. :evil grin: particualry the ending of it. so read/review :puppy eyes: pwease
Storm5 chapter 2 . 1/29/2003
You've got to update this story. Sooo unique. It'll be nice having a story were Bulma and Zarbon are a couple.

HURRY!
Zarbon's Sweatheart chapter 2 . 1/17/2003
Hurry with the rest of the story already!
cake ish good 4 u chapter 2 . 10/14/2002
Wai! I fell in love with this story after the first paragraph or so - it's really original! Keep going; I wanna know what happens next!
Deathhammer chapter 1 . 9/3/2002
When you creating more of the series? I want to read more. My story is up and running so please read it. It's Earth's Savior. Also my dad (Wizard69) says that your writing is vary good and he would like to read more.
Deathhammer chapter 2 . 9/3/2002
Hey I like this series so far, and I'm not much intrested in DBZ. This caught my attention. I see that you alo like my father 's poetries (Wizard69).You write very good yourself.

I have the first part of a story I made up done and is about to be out on this site. Please read and review it. It should be on in a couple of days.

Again, I like this story going on. Keep it up! I want to read more.
Artemis787 chapter 2 . 8/25/2002
Hey like your fic! Please update! PLEASE
Son Rhandi chapter 2 . 8/7/2002
What? That's it? U_U I can't wait for the next chapter. Namek saga rules! (Thanks for the dedication and the BB reviews, btw _)
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