Reviews for A Start With no Finish
keacdragon chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
awww poor Larten...

Love it! Oh hey, read your profile today! all the way to the bottom!
Preston-Tour chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Really loved your story, it was fantastic. I think I am one of the rare people on FF that really love a good deep and meaningful description to dialog. I don't really know why but for that reason I loved this, especially at the end where there were no words only thoughts and that was very well done.

I did laugh at Gavner going to take the food, that's such a boyish thing to do and I loved it.

As for your AN at the bottom I'll just add that we did a sixty-seven minute silence in work -if you read the papers and knew who died from which country you'd know why- to remember and reflect.

Then there was a shop lifter so that kind of took the edge off the whole mournful moment, which was kind of a shame but I guess it shows that no matter how many people try to do the decent thing there's always one dirty ill-dressed sod who spoils it.