Oh my God this was fantastic

That was super hot. Love how he returned the pleasure too!

uhh... how hot was that? :) loved it.

Oh wow. Absolutely amazing.

You just have to write more. This is the best "Lizzy-and-Darcy-in-bed-scenario" I've ever read.

And I've read quite a few.

Love

Sandra in Sweden

THAT was pretty hilarious lol! Elizabeth is certainly going to be the death of Fitzwilliam Darcy ;D. This is going on my favorites because this was a good well done!

Duchess of Buckingham

Curiosity, in this case, did not kill the pussy cat! lol

Great continuance of characteristics in both Lizzy and Fitzwilliam.

Playful banter as we have come to expect with these two with the addition of the intriguing exploration of the marital bed. Delightful addition to the imagination of life after marriage for our favorite P&P couple.

If only people were as good as you are...

This story was so good! I really love it!

It's one master piece. :)

Your way of writing, your imagination and all details!

I loved reading this.

You are one of the best, most talented writers I saw here.

Good job!

hehe i loved it. It was romantic and funny.

I absolutely loved it! congratulations!

it's funny and hot, well written and the characters are so lively and.. realistic! seriously, good job! ;)

I read this little One-Shot and I am so happy I did it.

I liked it very much, your writing skills are awesome. I hope you continue writing stories, because you have some talent :)

When I started reading I was a bit astonished. I thought Darcy was much of a passionate men. I mean he hides that side of his personality very well, but I expected our Lizzy to bring out the best of him.

And Darcy being so focused only on procreation... that was not cool. Come on Darcy ripp of Lizzys clothes and-

Okay to much of my own imagination... but of course our dear Lizzy makes what she can do best:being absolutely out of her role as a prober wife and woman of her time. She keeps fascinating me again and again, me and Mr. Darcy, who proved his abilities in fast learning in a very courageous way ( more men should be like him ).

By the way I had to laugh very hard about some of your writing, you really managed writing a humorous and romantic short-story. I hope Lizzy stays curious and Darcy adaptive. I'm looking forward to read from you!

oooh my! that was excellent work!

HawkAngel

That was... wow... something! I almost had to go outside to cool myself off! There are no words to describe how much I'm in love with this. I'll favorite it and re-read it over and over and over again. What a wonderful piece.

Wow... *fans self* that was steamy! Very well done and I really enjoyed their innocence, curiosity, and passion with each other.

This was absolutely fantastic!

That was Hot. Its nice Darcy didn't forget to pleasure Lizzy, the way she did for him. You know how men only think of themselves.