Reviews for snapshot James and Lilly
W.Blackbird chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Constructive criticism: You misspelled "Lily."
Lightfully chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I Like It, But You Do Have To Work On Your Grammar, & Lily's Name Only Has 1 'L', Love.

I Think You Could Do A Lot Better, You Should Rewrite This, &Just Correct Your Grammar&Spelling Mistakes.
Victoria Gryffindor Peverell chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Just two things- 1, the correct spelling is Lily with one L, 2, they don't graduate in England... Other than that, your writing is pretty good.