Aww, what a beautiful story! I’m Tori and Beck mended fences and I’m glad that Tori also brought Jade and Jasmine back together too *gushes* Jori getting sun and moon tattoos instead of rings was better than rings when they got engaged - it was perfect. I’m so happy they found each other through it all, I love your writing, WP :’-) 3

Whoa, Tori made a hella sexy big boi move there :-O I’m glad she broke down the rest of Jade’s stubborn walls. Jade has to figure out eventually that the people she loves will sometimes hurt and/or disappoint her. But Tori’s one of the few ones who will do whatever it takes to make it right again :’-)

Lol, the Wests are barking mad *rotfl* But at least Daryl told Jasmine she can’t kick Jade out, so...whoop! :-DDD

Aww damn, Jasmine’s trying to kill the sexy, romantical Jori dream! So much rudeness ‘;-l

Aww man, Jasmine sucks for skipping dinner with Jade and Tori :-/ Naturally, Jori must get revenge by engaging in the sexuals in the basement ;-D

Jade really made some strides in this new chapter: resisting the temptation to take Beck back and convincing her mom to have dinner with her and Tori :’-) I’m certain dinner will be a total sh*t show, but this is major growth for Jade :-DDD

I loved the confontration between Jade and her mom! I can’t believe Jasmine is only thinking about Jade’s future career and not her present happiness *sighs* It really sucks that they can’t or don’t have a semblance of a relationship. But I’m glad that Jade told her mom what’s what with Tori, so freaking cool :-DDD

Of course Beck makes a play for Jade when she wants nothing to do with him *eye roll* I like Beck a lot and sympathise with the fact that he not only lost his girlfriend, but his friend as well. But it was his choice to make. He should’ve known it would be hard for Jade to be around him after he broke her heart - he can’t have his cake and eat it :-/

I was reading silently all the while, but felt I had to comment on the developments in this chapter. I’m glad you’re taking it slow with Jori finding their feet in a new friendship and now with their blossoming romance. You’ve characterised Jade so well in this chapter and her struggle to let people in emotionally since her parents divorced. I can see where her mom’s coming from where she thinks she’s looking out for Jade’s best interests with not dating girls. But Jasmine needs to actually sit down and have a real conversation with her daughter before dictating to her. I’m glad Jade cut her date short and went to Tori instead *squees hard* Excellent writing, I’m looking foward to seeing how the rest of the story unfolds :’-D

i’ve read this story more times than i can count. it’s kinda sad how i’m still not over jori, but your writing is absolutely breathtaking. thank you so so much for sharing your art with the world

youre so good at writing its insulting... brUh

Jori is like camren in a way.

Wow, just wow. I know I’m years late but I am so happy I found this story. I’ve read a lot of stories on this site, and yours is by far the best one I’ve ever read. Every paragraph, to every chapter was perfect. You are an incredible writer, especially considering you wrote this so long ago! I don’t know if you are still writing, but I hope you are because clearly you are a natural, and today you made a fan out of me. I’m looking forward to reading some of your others stories, and if they are even half as good as this one, I know I’ll love them. Thanks for reading and again, phenomenal job!

holy shit that was amazing. I know I'm years late to this but honestly this is one of the best fics I've ever read. thank you.

Absolutely breathtaking, thank you so much for writing this and putting it out into the world. I was grinning like a maniac throughout the epilogue. I was grinning like a maniac through the whole thing, really. Even the hard times were so well written that the pain went over smooth. I felt like I melted my way through.

I first read this years ago and it was so beautiful and now I’m back and I reread it and got to the epilogue and realized it was new and just...beautiful. My heart is aglow! Thank you so much for the joy your story gives me