|Reviews for Afterglow|
| KrRcksMySx chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
I really liked this story :) I finished it but wanted to leave my review on the 1st chapter because I loved the way you wrote the opening. It just sounds so poetic :) That's why I had to add it to my faves (not cause it smut or anything... Okay that too).
Very well written, adorable story line, funny interactions, and perfect fluff to smut ratio :)
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 5 . 8/29/2013
Mako's characters are taking over the fandom. I love it!
Well last chapter, pretty much all I have to say is that I like your writing. I like the way you describe things.
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Makokam kinda gave me a spoiler, but I totally didn't expect that!
You guys are killing me. The fluff is going to eat me up!
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 3 . 8/29/2013
Omigah! My heart was in my throat!
Prepping her?! Lol the thoughts of a father.
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
You're right... I do mind!
I happen to think you did Mindy just fine! And once again. I'm reading at work. Smh.
| WhiteTigerLilly chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
So Mako sent me. Uff. Creative juices? I've got to stop reading because I'm at work. Lol got me squirming at my station. Sheesh!
I liked your use of anatomically correct words where applicable. Mons pubis? You surprised me. Lol. Will have to continue this ANOTHER time.
| FictionalMasterpiece chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
I love the story but Dave is only 3 years older than Mindy not 5. In Kick Ass 2 he's 18 and she's 15. It is a good story but the devil is in the details.
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/5/2013
You should totally write more, it's really good
| iwntyou2wntme chapter 5 . 5/1/2013
WOW. This is pretty damn amazing. I read this because Makokam mentioned it and it is really /really/ good. I LOVE IT. I expected a little more profanity from Mindy though, but that's not a priority. Wonderful story :)
| The Dark Eccentric chapter 5 . 12/20/2012
And theres Marcus' reaction. Jeez, he could have taken that better. All in character though I suppose. But anyways, great job really.
| The Dark Eccentric chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Fuck yeah, that was awesome. I got directed here from Makokam himself and that was a pretty goo short story. And I love the ending. Would like to see how Marcus reacted though...hmm, maybe thats the bonus chapter...time to go see!
Really good story though. Nice job.
| Ninja Master chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
Another great ch!
| Ninja Master chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Great so far!
| Black Ahab chapter 5 . 1/16/2012
This was rather nice. A viable AU of Makokam's PCverse. I wish you spent more time in reactions to the engagement. Making mine Makokam's words: "Speaking Dillon, ya know what this needed? Angela and Jessi squeeing over Mindy's impending engagement. Casimir's reaction would have been nice too for that matter."
It's only my option, but you should write a sequel. Good work.
| hughcri chapter 4 . 12/22/2011
Good story I love the Matrix reference you should make a sequel