Reviews for The Class Trip
Zokusho chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Technically there's nothing wrong with the writing, and they are my favorite pairing...

But I think both Sae and Natsume were out of character. Natsume wouldn't be nowhere near as comfortable talking to a stranger, much less to Sae, and Sae wouldn't talk about her writing, and certainly she wouldn't offer to show it to Natsume. She doesn't let even Hiro to read her manuscripts.

Also, canonically, Natsume knew Sae's name from the very first day at Yamabuki. Natsume has many friends in her class and she actually enjoys being with them. This is more apparent in manga, though.