Reviews for Evolution
The Terrible Jester chapter 15 . 11/26/2011
nice story! liked it a lot.
Lucksa chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
What I really liked about this particular chapter was that James, Remus, and Peter had explanations about why Hogwarts was so important to them that were twice as long as Sirius', yet his explanation was ten times more powerful.

This is really interesting.(:
Lucksa chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
What I really liked about this particular chapter was that James, Remus, and Peter had explanations about why Hogwarts was so important to them that were twice as long as Sirius', yet his explanation was ten times more powerful.

This is really interesting.(:
Guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2011
Poor Padfoot... He never deserved any of that...having your best friend die, being separated from your godson...to have everything you love in the world disappear...to be locked up for 13 years, then die shortly after, being just minutes away from freedom...

I blame the ministry.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/23/2011
Now I feel sorry for Lupin...

Being bit by a werewolf at age 7...having everybody you live afraid of you...being told by the whole Wizarding world that you will amount to nothing...having the only friends you have EVER had taken away from you...

I blame umbridge.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/23/2011
Now I feel sorry for Lupin...

Being bit by a werewolf at age 7...having everybody you live afraid of you...being told by the whole Wizarding world that you will amount to nothing...having the only friends you have EVER had taken away from you...

I blame umbridge.
Guest chapter 13 . 10/23/2011
Ok, now I blame Dumbledore.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/23/2011
Poor Padfoot... He never deserved any of that...having your best friend die, being separated from your godson...to have everything you love in the world disappear...to be locked up for 13 years, then die shortly after, being just minutes away from freedom...

I blame the ministry.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
Sirius caring for his murdering, sadistic, no-life cousin...?

Did Snape just wash his hair?
Fire The Canon chapter 11 . 10/6/2011
Drabbles aren't really my thing, because I just find them too short to really get in to. But in saying that, I think you did a really good job at it. You reflect on Sirius' feelings really well and it is very believable. I'm sure that really was what he was feeling. Your characterisation is really well done and I was actually intrigued. I couldn't see any spelling errors, either, so well done. But what really stood out to me was your characterisation of Sirius. I really think you did a fantastic job on that front.
Gamma Orionis chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Hurray! I'm doing this challenge too! *Hearts*

Anyway...

This was an absolutely brilliant start. I love Sirius's naiveté (i.e. "that was what house elves were for, right?"). It's honestly quite adorable, and makes the later part even sadder. I also liked the repetition of "Until" - quite poetic, and the last line was perfect. I felt rather sorry for Sirius in this, but I felt like there was a sort of hope in it too - hope that someday his moral state would improve. (i.e. "Until right and wrong started to matter")

If there are any grammar errors in this one, I can't find them. I really enjoyed this, so great work!
Thelostone2013 chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
The brokenness he feels in 13 was entirely relatable! Nicely done!

14 was sweet, but you places that bitter hue in all the right places that made me hurt for the good things lost.

And 15 - perhaps my favorite, because I knew what was coming, but it was ”sobering” at it's completion. Well written, all of them!
Thelostone2013 chapter 12 . 9/16/2011
Love the last line of chapter 12 - the desperation is just so sincere... nicely done!
Mr Bellatrix Lestrange chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
One: fantastic. Right off the bat he's become a stranger to his family.

Two: I like how we know how each of the Marauder's see Hogwarts, and as it's SO MUCH MORE for ole' Padfoot.

Three: Lonely and Blood, the two best themes captured here.

Four: The togetherness, it's amazingly added.

Five: The tighter bond, the empty hole. It's all so plainly Sirius. I feel bad he'll never be fixed..

Six: :) xoxo

Seven: Because that's what they're about right? :D

Love.
Thelostone2013 chapter 5 . 9/13/2011
I love this - great job of capturing little moments that matter...