|Reviews for American Pie Story(The Bet)|
| guest chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Really bad, sorry. And btw, never ruin the relationship between Heather and Oz, never. They are the best couple in those movies.
| leigh chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
um...dont you think that it is a sign to stop writing this shit if you have to defend yourself by writing yourself a review? the only good reviews for any of your stories are either written by yourself in defense of probably by your friends. I cant even tell you to quit while your ahead...I hope you cant get much worse. you have no imagination and the writing skills of a twelve year old. finish junior high and them try again sweetie pie
| xetha chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
ok, ur save the last dance fic was rated r when it was below g, and this piece of crap is rated pg, and u use the word fuck like, in every other sentence! either you are really screwed up, or...well, ur just realli screwed up.
xetha's handy helping hint of the day: USE THE FRICKIN ENTER KEY ONCE AND A WHILE! THEY'RE CALLED P-A-R-A-G-R-A-P-H-S! they help, you know!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
sucked. crap. bull. boring. shit.
thts a compliment.
| Darth Tel chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS THIS CRAP!
PS: and haven't you ever heard of a little thing called the ENTER KEY?
| kittybaby992 chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
omg that sucked, i no this is where ur supposed to b able to write and junk, but thats what it was, junk, total crap, please do not write any more of that stuff, cause really, it sucked
| O.K. oo chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Shit, shit, shit, and more shit. D
| smimfan85 chapter 2 . 8/25/2003
| Peaches chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
wot the fuck? tht was shite! no offence...no w8 thts a lie, offence. Trylinkin it sumhow to how the movie actually goes not just...they met, they fucked. thts not how it happens. i hope u dont wanna b a writer wen ur older, coz i certainly wont b buyin ur bux 4 any other reeson thn 2 swat flies with them.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2002
That is the worst piece of crap I have ever read.
| thatiss0dawn chapter 2 . 8/6/2002
| Sunbelt chapter 1 . 8/2/2002
That was so funny i was cring!
| megan chapter 1 . 7/17/2002
um, man dat really suck
| Blixe Cobalt chapter 1 . 5/31/2002
utter crap...even worse than some of my self insert EVA fics...give up and try again...i mean come on. Jim gets lucky on the first date! thats just not right.
| Mascalzone Latino chapter 1 . 5/16/2002
Definitely not a g rated story. How could you give this a g rating considering the language you had in it?