Reviews for American Pie Story(The Bet)
guest chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Really bad, sorry. And btw, never ruin the relationship between Heather and Oz, never. They are the best couple in those movies.
leigh chapter 1 . 4/4/2005
um...dont you think that it is a sign to stop writing this shit if you have to defend yourself by writing yourself a review? the only good reviews for any of your stories are either written by yourself in defense of probably by your friends. I cant even tell you to quit while your ahead...I hope you cant get much worse. you have no imagination and the writing skills of a twelve year old. finish junior high and them try again sweetie pie
xetha chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
ok, ur save the last dance fic was rated r when it was below g, and this piece of crap is rated pg, and u use the word fuck like, in every other sentence! either you are really screwed up, or...well, ur just realli screwed up.

xetha's handy helping hint of the day: USE THE FRICKIN ENTER KEY ONCE AND A WHILE! THEY'RE CALLED P-A-R-A-G-R-A-P-H-S! they help, you know!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
sucked. crap. bull. boring. shit.

thts a compliment.
Darth Tel chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS THIS CRAP!

~roguemagic 13~

PS: and haven't you ever heard of a little thing called the ENTER KEY?
kittybaby992 chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
omg that sucked, i no this is where ur supposed to b able to write and junk, but thats what it was, junk, total crap, please do not write any more of that stuff, cause really, it sucked
O.K. oo chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Shit, shit, shit, and more shit. D
smimfan85 chapter 2 . 8/25/2003
interesting
Peaches chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
wot the fuck? tht was shite! no offence...no w8 thts a lie, offence. Trylinkin it sumhow to how the movie actually goes not just...they met, they fucked. thts not how it happens. i hope u dont wanna b a writer wen ur older, coz i certainly wont b buyin ur bux 4 any other reeson thn 2 swat flies with them.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2002
That is the worst piece of crap I have ever read.
thatiss0dawn chapter 2 . 8/6/2002
ahahahaha more!
Sunbelt chapter 1 . 8/2/2002
That was so funny i was cring!
megan chapter 1 . 7/17/2002
um, man dat really suck
Blixe Cobalt chapter 1 . 5/31/2002
utter crap...even worse than some of my self insert EVA fics...give up and try again...i mean come on. Jim gets lucky on the first date! thats just not right.
Mascalzone Latino chapter 1 . 5/16/2002
Definitely not a g rated story. How could you give this a g rating considering the language you had in it?
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