Aw I always liked the pairing of Luna and Neville, and am still surprised they didnt get together in the books.

This was a great fic, there was action, romance and plenty of emotion. If I can give some contructive criticism, its just that I felt in a few places your sentences were slightly too long, and it made reading a little more difficult. But you've got a lovely writing style, and I found myself grinning at the end of the story :D