Reviews for Promise
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
This may not reach you because of how long ago this was posted, but you are a very talented writer, everyone will make a grammar error once in a while, but it takes true skill to tell stories. And you do a marvelous job
GummyDrive chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Aww! This is so adorable. I swear love anything Edwin related LOL
claraowl chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
It was kawaaiiiiiiiiiiiii! XD
rikuisis90 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Good job! I believe it was very well done and very possible. You should not sell yourself so short. Ed and Win are an awesome couple to write about (my favorite along with Serena and Darien). I hope you continue writing their sweet moments.
Alex Leep chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
If this is lame, I'd love to see "good". I thought it was delightfully charming. Excellent for your first Edwin piece!
DoomedToBeACrazyFanGirlForever chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
awww!
ada69 chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Aww that was really cute! I love EdWin. :) And I like your Makorra avatar as well :D

ada
emevis chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
gr8 story!
AndreKimiko chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Is not lame or mediocre! Is really cute! I coulnd't help but smile the whole time :3 (btw, Tsubaki and Black Star are meant to be lovers! ;-))
TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
heheh this was so cute! good job!
Janieshi chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Aww, this was totally sweet! And I can definitely see this happening in the episode :D Well done!

~Janie~
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
This is really sweet.
LittleSaxony chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I like how you incorportated this into an established scene in the manga/Brotherhood anime.
Gisel0202 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
So cute :3 Ed and Winry really are sweet together :D
Rain chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
*edit* Forgot.. can't do funky emoticons/symbols on FanFiction. xDD; I think you get the picture, though. x)

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