|Reviews for Rite of Passage|
| Geoduck chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
This is an absolutely wonderful fanfiction. It does something new and different, exploring the earlier life of a major character in a way that, I think, no other Ranma story has done before.
I like the way you wrote Ryoga, portraying him as a more innocent version of the lost boy we all know. I like the details you created about this phase in his life.
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 9/14/2011