|Reviews for Make You Watch|
| winegirl chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
Standing and clapping. WHY can't the show actually deal with emotions? I really don't get it. The actresses have the talent to go there...sigh. Thank you. Yay. And angsty much? ;)
| darkemberdagger chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
This story brilliant. Absolutely amazing. So good. I honestly can't believe that they didn't discuss ANY of this. That was such a letdown. Just one thing, I know he said he wouldn't kill Maura in 1x08, but towards the end of 2x10, he said "I'm dying, and I think I'll take you and Dr. Isles with me." So I think he would've killed Maura after he raped her. But who cares, because this story is so awesome and I wish you would continue because you're such a good writer and this aftermath needs to be done
| Leonhart17 chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
This is the perfect ending and is now a part of my personal brain!canon. Great job!
| Calzona-Rizzles1997 chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
I much enjoyed this story! It was extremely well written and the way you kept the characters in character was phenominal. Well done!
| sandlinerica chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
more please! I want to see them kiss!
| chawkchic chapter 3 . 9/16/2011
| AnywhereElse chapter 2 . 9/15/2011
:( so terrible...but i loved it. very very well done. can't wait for part 3!
| AlexandriaVE chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Another great fic that actually addresses the trauma and aftermath...there would be no birthday party! By the time they got done at the hospital and with statements, etc. They would just want to go to sleep!
| JF1993 chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Aw! My heart ached for Maura
| cerysm92 chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
This is amazing.
| anamatics chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Beautiful, painful, and full of all the angst of the world. I love the way that you're going about this. It's not over the top, there's no pronouncements of rape - Hoyt never raped in the books or in the show, that was his creepy marine apprentice who seemed to get off on raping dead people - it's just two people trying to cope with a traumatic situation.
I don't know if you've decided if this is an established relationship or one that has yet to blossom between the ladies, but either way, this is a huge blow to them - I don't know how you can end this in one more part, but I look forward to reading it regardless.
Please have there be lots of hugging and very little My Little Pony. :D
| darkemberdagger chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
That was great! Please let part 3 be super long, there was so much that should have been discussed that wasn't even mentioned!
| starlightxf chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Goodness! I love your style of writing and you portray the characters flawlessly! I recently stumbled upon your stories and I'm ecstatic to read through all your stories! I can already tell you're going to be my fav. R&I author! Oh and one last thing, thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us! :)
| Gatefan1 chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Now this is so much more realistic. The ending of the show was just too bizarre. After all that they went through, to have continued with the birthday party was so odd. The fact that Maura and Jane were not together and Jane came home alone was ridiculous.
Angie and Sasha did such a good job, but we were denied seeing Jane go to Maura after her initial breakdown in Korsak's arms. Plus everything else that would have happened. Of course, after they ignored the aftermath of the shooting, I guess we should know not to expect appropriate closure.
But this - wow - you just nailed it. Wish you were writing for the show.
| NinjaDriver chapter 2 . 9/14/2011
Wow, your such a great writer! This was a very good chapter! Thank you for continuing to write this story even though you have other stories to write too! Thanks a bunch! Look forward to the last chapter! :)