Reviews for Happy With you
4thkage chapter 6 . 3/24
that was fast to fall in love with one another...
no hexing...
4thkage chapter 4 . 3/24
yup...i agree with u...
it's pretty much ooc...
4thkage chapter 1 . 3/24
wow...for the 1st chapter...
i think the story will be interesting...
continue reading!
hjm1219 chapter 17 . 10/25/2014
This is a really abrupt and weak ending, which is sad, because the story was good.
clumsydolphin chapter 4 . 3/4/2014
Personally I don't think you should worry about characters being ooc. I write Dramione also, and going by canon any Dramione pairing is already ooc. So let loose and forget about it lol. I love your stories.
Guest chapter 17 . 1/7/2014
One of the best i have read
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2013
"What happens when..." Is a very generic thing to put in your summary. It gives the impression of an inexperienced writer and I personally rarely bother even reading the first chapter of such fics. Hope you prove me wrong.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
omg lolpug
Narnia and Harry Potter 4 EVER chapter 17 . 8/18/2013
This is an amazing story I love it!
ExTaCy925 chapter 17 . 5/23/2013
Cute loved it
clumsydolphin chapter 7 . 5/6/2013
For the life of me, I do not understand why you don't have hundreds and hundreds of reviews by now, I almost passed on the story because of it! Thankfully I didn't because this is really, really good!
Momma chapter 17 . 1/29/2013
I loved this story ! Great take on a direction I never even thought of ! KUDOS !
Cat130 chapter 17 . 11/24/2012
loved it
Reader chapter 17 . 11/18/2012
Good start but you probably need a little more practice with plot development. There was quite a bit of potential for additional story here, like at the point when Draco talks about the history of the Malfoys? Also, you need a beta to proofread for you/ check for some grammar/ etc. Good luck! Keep writing as long as you enjoy it and don't let anyone's opinions about your work sway your interest in writing! (:
Iwao chapter 17 . 5/31/2012
I don't know. I admire you for having the discipline to follow through and finish the story. But the characters are extramely OOC, not only their character traits, but even down to their speech patterns (your Draco and Hermione and the canon ones sound like they are from very different walks of life) But be that as it may, the main thing I'd like to point out is that you really, trully, urgently need a good Beta!

That said, keep writing, you obviously enjoy it, and besides, practice makes perfect!
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