Reviews for Wedding Night
Oceaneyes725 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
eclare137forever chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Amazing story! good job writing and good ideas! lovee itt! its actully accurate to unlike some storys people write
justinepersona chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Mm...a little short but I really enjoyed reading it. ]
Pat chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
that was amazing really nice work :)
kadabrafreak890 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I liked it, but I'd like a little more foreplay. It is their wedding night after all, and while I know they are both eager, Eli did say he wants to make the night special for both of them, so it makes sense for him to take is slow since it is Clare's first time.

Overall, good job though.
eclarefan54 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Aww it was cute and sweet and perfect! I loved this one, Eli was just so sweet ah.
BabyLollipopGirl32 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This was cute, no it wasn't short or weird, but you could of been a little more descriptive with it, but other thsn thst this was a cute one shot