|Reviews for Is Something Burning?|
| Gathering the Roses chapter 16 . 1/16
I really hope this gets updated someday. Interesting story!
| Gathering the Roses chapter 4 . 1/15
Alright. So. I know there are many many chapters for me to read still but... seems to me like Nanoha is so preggors. Better not be yuuno T_T
| FateKitty chapter 16 . 11/16/2013
Is this EVER going to be updated?
| ladyhades chapter 16 . 5/5/2013
You're gonna update this, yes? The suspense is killing me over here!
| Himechi21 chapter 16 . 4/9/2013
sighs.. this story make me depress ;o;
how could Nanoha cheat on fate and Fate also found someone new?
at least even Nanoha still love Fate :U
and vivio is not fair TwT why don't she angry Fate bring another woman? TTTT
is it mean that my favorite couple won't be together anymore? Dx
duh but i have faith on you that this will turn out okay.. (o.o) right? ._. please!
| SapphoSensei chapter 16 . 4/5/2013
hows the story coming?
| mh chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
i wonder why nanoha didnt starbreak when he attempt to nanoha is at least double a with limiter on.
compared to lisbin , I prefer hayate x fate.
| Mre chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
I totally enjoyed this. Even though it was slightly suffocating to read at the beginning chapters because of Nanoha's weird behaviors, it got slightly better as all the questions being answered as the story progresses. I'm really curious with what's Hayate planning. Does it make me a bad person if I'm kinda rooting for Hayate and Fate to end up together? Even if it's just for awhile? It would be interesting to see that happen. Hahaa. xD
I do hope you continue soon!
| Jay chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
Yayayayayay! An update! You always do a wonderful and amazing job with your chapters so I'm happy about that. As well as the fact that you portray their feelings so well :) keep up the awesome job and definitely looking forward to your next update which I hope is real real real soon please and thank you :D
| Kris-tim-chan chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
shi, fate dont do that to nanoha! u need understand her T.T
| Emrriz Mei chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
Hohoho. What a sad chapter, remembering the good ol' days, ne, Nanoha. And I wonder what's Fate plan to do with Lisbin, or Vivio's plan wih Lisbin. I really also want to know Hayate's problem.
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
omg so interesting please update soon!
| Kiki chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
I still can't quite pick on what Hayate's doing, if she's trying to bring Nanoha and Fate back together, or she had fallen for Fate and checks grounds, for sure there's something bad going with her previous girlfriend in all of this...
As for Nanoha, well her actions are expected so far, she herself cheated on Fate willingly knowing that would hurt Fate, didn't have even courage to tell Fate the truth before cheating would happen(we still don't know if the kid is Yuuno or coming from that rape), and now she sees her long-life rejected partner showing interest in someone new, and feels jealous like hell, cause that seems to be still her Fate.
If I recall it right, Nanoha never told Fate about the whole rape thing anyway?
I think that will become important news into their reconcilation in future.
Also does Vivio got a thing for Lisbin now?
| ElementalMiko12 chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
D: i wanna read another chappy .
Keep up the good work update soon!
| Xenoverse chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
When Hayate said "OH! Rides in cool cars works on older women too", I thought she tried to hint Fate something. lol Somehow I want Hayate to end up with Fate. Aw, I'm such a bad fan of NanoFate, but in this fic, I can't help! XD I was glad to know that Hayate is on Fate's side, defending her, judging from how she talked to Nanoha about Nanoha cheating on HER BEST FRIEND. LOL GREAT!
Nanoha, you have a long long long loooonnnng road to make yourself worth for having Fate again. Now, I wonder how she will prove that she still deserves Fate. :P
Thanks for updating. I really enjoyed it. But to be frank, I'm still not satified! LOL Please give me more if you have time. Please spare some part of your precious time to update this fic. You're getting at it well. I'll be rooting for you! :D