Reviews for Is Something Burning?
genetic-depression chapter 16 . 4/6
Ha, I'm not being rude, but i think your plot is lost it's shine... and I say it again the main idea of the story is lost because you add so many twist... It's like a mixed vegetable that turned into a crap... UNLESS you have something that in your sleeve that can turn this upside down again... And I'm still holding up to you "HAPPILY EVER AFTER;"... Update? Or give up?
Naaahh...don't give up... it's too good to be waste...
Jaaaz chapter 8 . 2/16
Hey, come back. Please! Its over a year!
carmenrosa.aguilar.9 chapter 16 . 8/29/2014
Ojojojojo O.O I loved the chapter, of course I do not like this pregnant nanoha the ferret, let alone that of fate ceparara :( but is improving and maybe later is not it hehehehe :D

I understand it is not serious and that you have not updated all the time if it is very good is very depressing not knowing what will happen after this great chapter T-T since I'm super mega emosionada to know what will happen T-T

no more I say goodbye, but before I send you a big kiss and hug and veres without any fault on your next update :D ejejejeje

Note: I hope you will forgive me if there are any erros in writing but do not write very well in English :p but that if I do I try hehehehe
Gathering the Roses chapter 16 . 1/16/2014
I really hope this gets updated someday. Interesting story!
Gathering the Roses chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
Alright. So. I know there are many many chapters for me to read still but... seems to me like Nanoha is so preggors. Better not be yuuno T_T
FateKitty chapter 16 . 11/16/2013
Is this EVER going to be updated?
ladyhades chapter 16 . 5/5/2013
You're gonna update this, yes? The suspense is killing me over here!
Himechi21 chapter 16 . 4/9/2013
sighs.. this story make me depress ;o;
how could Nanoha cheat on fate and Fate also found someone new?
at least even Nanoha still love Fate :U
and vivio is not fair TwT why don't she angry Fate bring another woman? TTTT
is it mean that my favorite couple won't be together anymore? Dx
duh but i have faith on you that this will turn out okay.. (o.o) right? ._. please!
SapphoSensei chapter 16 . 4/5/2013
hows the story coming?
mh chapter 16 . 2/9/2013
i wonder why nanoha didnt starbreak when he attempt to nanoha is at least double a with limiter on.

compared to lisbin , I prefer hayate x fate.
Mre chapter 16 . 2/8/2013
I totally enjoyed this. Even though it was slightly suffocating to read at the beginning chapters because of Nanoha's weird behaviors, it got slightly better as all the questions being answered as the story progresses. I'm really curious with what's Hayate planning. Does it make me a bad person if I'm kinda rooting for Hayate and Fate to end up together? Even if it's just for awhile? It would be interesting to see that happen. Hahaa. xD

I do hope you continue soon!
Jay chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
Yayayayayay! An update! You always do a wonderful and amazing job with your chapters so I'm happy about that. As well as the fact that you portray their feelings so well :) keep up the awesome job and definitely looking forward to your next update which I hope is real real real soon please and thank you :D
Kris-tim-chan chapter 16 . 1/25/2013
shi, fate dont do that to nanoha! u need understand her T.T
Yuki loves fics chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
Hohoho. What a sad chapter, remembering the good ol' days, ne, Nanoha. And I wonder what's Fate plan to do with Lisbin, or Vivio's plan wih Lisbin. I really also want to know Hayate's problem.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/24/2013
omg so interesting please update soon!
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