Reviews for Aumakua
njferrell chapter 2 . 10/28/2013
Bad guy did not plan for Super Seal.
njferrell chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
That person is in big trouble.
starrgirl22 chapter 3 . 5/25/2013
I like this so far. Good job!
ElSaTa chapter 10 . 3/15/2013
loved this story.
loveRnB chapter 10 . 11/13/2011
I read it like I said I would got to say this story it hard for me. :) i love it.
crokettsgirl chapter 10 . 9/29/2011
I love how you kept this story part of a series to the last one, having Danny living with Steve and full custody.

I also liked Stan coming in and how you let us know that Stan is a good guy and so is Danny by letting Stan visit with Grace.

And then that nice peaceful ending was nice. Now you can go to the next part of the series or a totally new story? Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 9 . 9/26/2011
Loved it! I loved the interrogation it was so good..lol...Also how well they know one another in the cabin scene...nicely done. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 8 . 9/26/2011
Again glad that you put in the English words for pidgin. I got some of it but not all of it.

I like how they got to the car and the safe house. How Steve's friend helped them out from DEA and Chin has the stuff to pick these guys up. Oh Sid, like how you dropped him in there too along with toast. Great job. sue
crokettsgirl chapter 7 . 9/26/2011
I enjoyed this. Love how Steve can get them through the jungle and then get a boat to them. How him and Chin come up with a plan for them to stay dead at..lol...Grace is really being a great sport. I wonder how Rachel is doing now and what she'll do to Danny once she finds out they are a live? Great job. sue
crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
Love the story about Seal training. I knew they were hard but didn't know they did that. Wow only 4 hours for a whole week. I guess incase they have to keep on the move. So loved the story of how he became Smooth Dog. Now they have to wait for their ride. You did a great job. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
I thought you did a great job explaining the Aumakua, to Grace and to Danny. I just love how Steve is with Grace, so loving and getting her involved to keep her mind busy and also about being afraid and telling her it was ok he gets that way too. And then the hard words, that he loved her too...Really good, enjoyed it. Sorry so slow but RL is very busy right now. I am enjoying this though. Sue
crazylove1980 chapter 10 . 9/19/2011
I really enjoyed both of these stories, they were easy to fall into. Just one thing, the crash of helicopters and airplanes are investigated by the FAA( Federal Aviation Administration) and the NTSB( National Transportation Safety Board), the FDA only regulates food and drugs. I look forward to your next story.
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 9/18/2011
Oh this was good. I'm glad that Chin handled things as he did. Having Stan noticfied and was surprised that Stan called chin and said what he did. Poor Rachel...but she is gonna go nuts like they said when they find out this was a lie and why...great job. sue
crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
Enjoyed the chapter , I was taken away from reading it part way through and just was able to get back to it. I think it's good how they are playing this with Steve, Danny and Grace. Again I'm glad the governor is aboard. This guy sounds really bad, I think The plan was the right one after what Komekona told Chin and what Kono found out. I hope they are , as Chin said, far enough away when Search and Rescue get there. Great job. Sue
francis2 chapter 10 . 9/17/2011
I enjoyed this very very much. Thank you!
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