Ocular migraines are a trip, right? I’ve only had one, but it was so weird ...

aw Danny being referred to as a little scruffy yapping dog.
Loved the conversation they had about pets. Sad but true about Danny comments and Steve having a dog. Even Danny too if was allowed a dog same thing would happen b/c of there work.

This story was a joy to read! I love the action mixed in with the lightheartedness. These two are such great partners, and you have written them so well.

HA! Loved Danny.

I have read this story several times, & I love it each & every time. I love the back & forth between Danny & Steve, the concern for each other about being their backup, & I absolutely love Steve shoving his immunity & means to the Coasties to get them to drop him off at Danny's location with him hanging from the rescue winch.

Hee. Now I want them to go hiking again. Although I pity whatever island they choose to go exploring on. :)

ROFL

Poor Danny. Migraines suck, no matter what type they are. Though I have to admit I would rather have his migraines over the type I actually suffer from.

Danny has a point, they always seem to find something when they commune with nature. I just think that Danny needs to not blame Steve as it seems like it only happens when it is both Steve AND Danny.

Thanks for writing & sharing.

I've never heard of that kind of migraine, but I can see how it would be problematic. But Danny is so awesome he could take down two bad guys even with his vision impaired. LOL! And Steve sweeping in on the 'copter - overly dramatic and so Steve. Ha! Perfect!

You're right! I did love the talk, though the action's awesome too! :P

Ah, someone else familiar with 'ocular migraines'.

They are a strange experience, that's for sure.

That was a very enjoyable story. I've just now started watching the new Hawaii Five-O and so far I'm enjoying it. The characters are likable and you've captured them very well here. I like how the punks were rounded up and that the girl will be okay. This read much like an episode and that's a very good thing. Nice chapter length too. Thanks so much for sharing this story.

Great second part to this story! Loved how the guys were able to be action heroes! Loved the last bit too!

Way fun thanks

Great chapter - funny last line!

Liked that one too:

"You're not supposed to move injured victims, Steven," he said severely.

"You can see that?" Steve said sheepishly.

"Still a little fuzzy and sparkly, but, yes, I can see you."

Lovely story. Danny was well prepared this time.