Reviews for The Lightning Bud
VividDreamer624 chapter 32 . 5/31/2016
What a great ending to a story. I have truly enjoyed this story so much. This alternate history of Ozai and Ursa is enjoyable. You begin to see the couple as they were once loving and briging out the best in one another. Slowly though war and pleasing his father is taking a toll on Ozai so it will be interesting to see what leads him to the darkness.
queenpri chapter 32 . 3/8/2016
This was such a good story! I'm a sucker for Urzai fan fiction and I'm not a fan of how Bryke portrayed their relationship. I mean, at some point Ursa and Ozai had to have at liked each other! Maybe that's just me being hopeful. I liked the way you portrayed all the characters and Ursa's bodyguard is refreshing. I hope you start your sequel soon! I really want to read it because you write so well!
waterlit chapter 32 . 8/2/2015
This was a quick ending -not that I'm complaining, just that I thought it would last much longer (I guess that'll be in the second part of your series). It's been interesting reading about nice-Ozai; such a pity that he chose the wrong path.
CelticSun14 chapter 32 . 8/1/2015
It's short, but I love it! I can't wait for Ursa and Ozai to be together again in part 2 :) Good luck at your new job!
Xx-LoveNeverMore143-xX chapter 31 . 7/23/2015
I loved the developement of Nazuka's character and her relationship to Ursa in this chapter. I will patiently wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.
CelticSun14 chapter 31 . 7/23/2015
Haha, I love Nazuka! I'm glad that Ursa will have a female friend. Although, if Ursa thinks that Nazuka is like Ozai...there could of course be trouble, what with Ozai's future. I'm probably reading too much into it. I'm very excited for this whole two-parter thing as well- and the comment about Ursa's future children- and her reaction to it- made me laugh. Love it!
XTheGirlWhoKnewTooMuchX chapter 30 . 6/10/2015
Wow! This story is incredible! You write the characters so well! I always wondered what the relationship between ursa and Ozai was like! I look forward to the next chapter!I am seriously in love with this!
Czarina Wolf chapter 30 . 5/27/2015
Finally a new chapter and Ursa finally gets a new badass bodyguard. Please keep being inspired and updating this masterpiece.
lizyeh2000 chapter 30 . 5/21/2015
Time for some tea~ thanks for updating!
CelticSun14 chapter 30 . 5/21/2015
Well, I'll admit it seemed a bit short-but only because I love the story so much :) I like Nazuka, and I think she's an interesting addition. I love how much lore and background info you've built up, like all of the political details and things like Dragon House. Anyway, I hope your next update comes soon; your updates always make my day.
Bookworm531 chapter 30 . 5/21/2015
You know the other day I was thinking "it's been a while since Lighting Bud updated" then a week later I check my inbox and...XD well whatever. Can't wait to see what happens next XP in what...three months? -teasing-
CzarinaWolf chapter 29 . 10/28/2014
Love Iroh's wit in this an Ozai's reply...No one could love his Ursa more than him.
Keep up the great work on this Urzai masterpiece
Forged Obsidian chapter 29 . 10/15/2014
I love the way you're showing how Ozai is being affected - even a little - by the war. It ads the spark of humanity that was missing from him for most of the show.
waterlit chapter 29 . 10/11/2014
This was a nice way to conduct this chapter - it's really quite sad to think of the person Ozai could have been had he not been so consumed with the desire for power and domination.
RakshaDaemon chapter 29 . 10/6/2014
I wish the writers had made their relationship this beautifully complex. I thoroughly enjoyed each and every chapter. Your writing style is so pleasant.
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