|Reviews for Blood|
| LoveLorraine chapter 32 . 4/22/2014
Omg Pleaaase update soon! I've been addicted to this story for sooo long!
| BloodiedAngel2362 chapter 32 . 1/23/2014
Glad you found some free time to write these two chapters. It was good, a nice treat, to get another glimpse of their personalities and delve a little into their lives again. Perhaps you'll have enough spare time to grace us with another update in the near future.
| lauraxxx chapter 32 . 1/17/2014
Loved this chapter !
Harley's face when she thought it was a flat ut BDSM club haha!
Offt do I sense romance between Jackie and Billy? Iis Harley going to get involved to try and hook them up?
I'm so happy you updated :) And with two chapters... you spoil us all :)
BRILLIANT CHAPTER :D
| lauraxxx chapter 31 . 1/17/2014
Awh i'm glad theyre back!
What an emotional chapter :D
As always fantastically written.
| lauraxxx chapter 30 . 1/3/2014
I really really love this story and hope you update like now!
Lov how you write Billy!
Pplease please please update soon.
| lauraxxx chapter 20 . 1/3/2014
I love this! :D
| lauraxxx chapter 18 . 1/3/2014
Awhhhh I love Joey.
Their relationship is adorable. Nice to get a little more insight into Billy's head too.
| lauraxxx chapter 16 . 1/3/2014
You know what, Harley is probably one of the truest most honest real own character I have had the pleasure to read om this site in a long time. She is growing with every chapter, starting off as a weak feeble junkie, to a scared little girl now to a woman gaining confidence and courage as well as taking on responsibility. There is no holier than thou attitude to her, she knows she has fucked and she knows that she wants to be a better person. You've created a character that is believable, likable and honest.
And I thought it was awesome when she gave Zane his beat down- got to of earned Billy's respect there!
| lauraxxx chapter 15 . 1/3/2014
Love this chapter- I actually re-read the kidnap/ test sceene twice, I enjoyed it so much!
Ohhh I wonder how this relationship between Harley ad Steven will go.
| lauraxxx chapter 11 . 1/3/2014
This chapter was so emotional.
You really are a great writer. Harley is so believable and you've written all the characters from the film perfectly.
The line 'don't let them see you flinch' Ii absolutely loved. I'd never really thought about it really, always seeing Billy and the rest as fearless or didn't care enough about themselves to fear; but I love the idea which is obviously true that the biggest baddest men have fears, they just can't show it. 'They'd walk in headfirst into their worst nightmare without blinking an eye' I love love love it!
I am totally in love with this story and truly in awe of your writing ability,
| lauraxxx chapter 6 . 1/3/2014
I know Billy has behaved like a complete asshole, but I can't help but love him lol!
I am seriously enjoying this, the writing is superb and the detail in your descriptions about her feeling's and thoughts are great! Also I just giggled to myself as I realized if she had taken her fathers surname her name would be Harley Darley lol!
Also I really liked that she turned out to be the Billy and Joe's sister, I thought she was going to somehow end up with one of them, so a nice twist there.
Anyway on to the next few chapters that i'm sure will be just as great.
| lauraxxx chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
I already love this :)
Your writing is really good and i'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.
As a writer of your own character, Harley, i'm already sympathizing with her- even before that horrible man came near her. I hope he gets what's coming to him, sooner rather than later.
Great first chapter :)
| xoShortee93 chapter 30 . 10/22/2013
So, completely ignoring the fact that I've been obsessing over an update for, really, ANY of your stories, can I just say how obsessed I've been with Billy in this chapter. I just have this image of him, shirtless although I don't think he was in your chapter, but I'm not his sister, so...
Shirtless, drinking coffee, smoking & lounging in sweatpants. It's a really fantastic image. But his attitude is just on point in your writing. I was really really really happy to see the alert that you had updated fo' realz this time. Needless to say, you could update in five years & I'll still be here. :-)
| Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 29 . 1/5/2013
Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my fucking god. What just happened? I need an update NOW to help me understand what just happened... STEVEN! ***You cannot do this to me again, I will not allow it!***
Another outstanding chapter by you my girl.
Ah Rick, will that guy ever take a hint? Steven is the one for Harley. No one else. ' "I thought I smelled somethin' sweet." I froze in mid-sway and whirled around, glaring at Rick as he leant in the entrance to the office. No matter how many times I pushed him away, or threw his compliments back in his face, he never seemed to grow tired of me. Shoulders wide as he crossed his arms, his skin was dark from the sun against his bright white t-shirt and his dark hair was slicked back, curling lazily around his ears.' That said - You make the OC very badass and alluring at all times. You know me, I love a bad boy.
' My heart took off like a sprinter in my chest and Rick looked away, eyes smoldering with a darkness I'd never seen. He was a jerk, yes. He liked to play cat and mouse with me, sure. And he had a supreme issue with my boyfriend, but I'd never seen him pissed like that.' That's because my girl he cares for you AND damn, would I like to see that face... ;)
Loved the scene between Bones and Harley, so clearly the old man does care? He may be a heartless bastard but occasionally i do enjoy seeing the softer version and babe, did you deliver. This scene blew me away, so angst. so raw. ' "If ya ever lie ta me again, Harley, I swear I might kill ya." Bones wasn't looking at me as he spoke, and he punctuated the sentence with a slam of his fist against his desk. I jumped and he finally looked at me. "And I don't wanna do that. Really don't."' Perfect in every way.
UH OH, this had me pausing... ' "He was bound to find out." He shot back, following me out to my car. Those were nearly the exact words that Joey had used against Billy the night I'd been attacked. But it wasn't either of them that had gotten screamed it; it had fallen on me, like everything else. "Nearly killed Steven." Rick said, his voice revealing his glee more than a smile ever could.' What did he do to him? Shit.
Could you imagine my face in that ending scene when Steven showed up? Happiness! I love that man, such an amazing OC. My second favourite ;)
Ooh burn... ' "Rick likes my scars." I slurred, ripping my arm away to see his reaction. His forehead worked as he realized what I meant. "I trusted ya." I hissed, tears burning my eyes.' Steven you are in trouble, however... i can understand both sides - he did what he thought was right. Not that I'm sticking up for him or anything! :D
Erm excuse me lady, i'll ask again... ' Never got the chance. We were about three blocks from my apartment, just over a little bridge, when Steven let out this muffled sound. It was soft and deep, easily missed. But I glanced up just in time to see him slump over against the window. I was screaming when we drove off the rode into a telephone pole.'
What just happened? Please can you update because i although I love the cliff hanger, i hate the idea of something being wrong with Steven! Love ya!
| Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 28 . 1/5/2013
Hey girl, so I'm here finally reviewing and declaring my love for this story again! I am just sorry it's taken me so long. As always I am never able to fault you're writing. Amazing.
To start, the way you described Billy and Bodie's relationship... Absolutely loved this part, talk about summing their whole bond up in a paragraph! Very true to the two men. And Heco, seriously girl, Harley is one lucky duck to have a friend like him (I swear looking at both yours and my stories, we do have a very soft spot for that man!).
... "I wonder if Steven would want me to wear them…with nothing else." Are you trying to kill me so soon with the Steven hotness? Damn, what a thought.
LOVED the scene with Heco coming to her rescue. I think it's just what she needed in that moment and boy did you paint a picture of him 'His appearance was intimidating enough, but his tats told an entirely different story. Only a few people in Stokely wore ink on their faces, and Heco was one of them. Everyone knew the Darley cook, and they knew to steer clear unless told otherwise.' Quite simply, YUM YUM YUM.
God I love the way you describe Billy and all that happened to lead him to the person he is now! This... '"If there's one thing Bones hates most, it's people takin' what's his." Then he shook off the expression, falling back into a placid stare.' Isn't that the truth?!
Jesus did i feel my heart tightening for Billy in that moment, girl how dare you make me feel such things! What happened, so harsh and raw for the life. Brilliant '"Bill is the only person I know who deserves an escape, but never took it."' And your writing. Perfect.
'Billy Darley. So big, so strong, and so cold. But he hadn't always been that way. People had made him this way. This life had made him this way. He raised an eyebrow. "Do not hug me." He grumbled, backing away a half of a step. A smile broke across my face and I shook my head.' Haha, 'Do not hug me' I would like to do more than hug the notorious gang lord! This made me smile.
This whole scene at the end between Billy and Harley. I just loved it, i love everything about this. You treat your readers every time to a chapter that leaves you wanting more!
So I'm heading to the next one. Love ya babe. Sparkly ;)